Black Poetry : (What I) Think-the remix

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Jan 17, 2004.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I look at U, I can't help but wonder how it would be
    2 feel your moist softness as we meet passionately.
    Letting our bodies surrender 2 the physical attraction...
    But I need more than just temporary satisfaction.
    I need something that's real...
    Something that my mind & heart can feel.
    Love...
    Attachment, enchantment, tender devotion...
    Any way U say it, it's got my mental open.
    Hopin' I will find that 1 I can be quiet with
    & still be comfortable,
    Someone I can find a secluded spot under a tree with
    & enjoy a peaceful lunch 4 2.

    At the expense of sounding corny,
    I'd rather feel affectionate than feel horny.
    I've played the game & retired at a young age,
    Now, I want a someone who'd co-write my future pages...
    Chapters 31 thru eternity,
    Someone willing 2 keep learning me,
    Be the missing piece that completes the puzzle of my life,
    The 1 who'll bring comfort & peace 2 my troubles & strife.
    Someone who's nice with a beautiful mind.
    Her aura will shine bright like the sun so she'd be easy 2 find.

    That's what I'm looking 4...
    I don't wanna have sex anymore.
    Until I'm sure...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my dis was deep and awesome display indeed
    no more sex til i'm sure.......that line whoaaaaa~
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...someone who loves your mind as you love hers...this was deep...keep flowin poet of the week.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, i got to give it to you brotha that blew my mind.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one nice
    likes ya flow indeed..
    it speaks loud...
    Angel
     
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    Brother...this piece speaks volumes
    about what is truly important in life
    and how sometimes it's somewhat
    of a journey to learn, not only to
    appreciate real companionship...
    but also to find it...
    Take your time...with your mind
    I know she'll be exactly what you want
    love your work here!
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thank U all 4 the read, feel, & words fam.

    Brother $$., that's what it's all about now, no more playin' games 4 me.

    watz., when minds are loved before deeds, that love is destined 2 last.

    phenom., I'm so glad 2 have been able 2, that means my words were felt.

    mzblk., some don't wanna hear, though.

    angelic., I've got a baby's momma (I hate that term), & I don't want my future seeds 2 live through that kind of drama, so I must be sure who I bless with myself.
     
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