Black Poetry : What I see.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What i see when i look at who u are
    a beautiful woman like da north star
    and then i see all u want to be
    someone speical and fully complete
    dat makes me lone to have u for "eternity"

    Yet, i'm here frozen in tyme
    in your mist beyond mines
    as u sweep me in delightful shine
    like an love titanic confessin lines

    I see a black goddess queen
    wit a flair of something unseen
    or like a blur second vision in ya dream
    I see us as one unity a tyte team

    I see a woman reaching new heights
    wit greater potential within ya sight
    I see a beauty puttin it together right
    still one fears, only to fight da hearts light

    I see something never seen
    only what one can dream
    us together as an unity team
    like an love titanic rollin wit steam

    I see u in da glist of morning morrow
    pass da doubts and horroible sorrow
    I see da exquisit adoration of compassion
    I see beautiful u in admiration fashion
    this what i see in my queen to be !
     
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    It's in my hope to what i see
    in a woman known as da queen
    a soft spoken love never seen
    she seem it lay heavy in my dream
    I wonder if she will ever release
    accept my heart , my love to be
    there so much i truely see
    in this beauty
     
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    this is truly a dedication to a fitting queen!
     
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    Thankz sis , If only she could understand it all and accept it......