Black Poetry : What I see...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr. Incognito, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. Mr. Incognito

    Mr. Incognito Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2003
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    What I see

    When I looke into the mirror
    I see my people
    I see what we have become
    I see in the past what my people have gone through
    Slavery
    the whips
    the chains
    the inhumanity
    I see Harriet
    I see Nat
    I see the Harlem Rennaisance
    I see my people getting attacked by dog`s
    I see Malcolm`s assasination
    I see Martin Luther King"s murder
    I see Patrice Lumumba`s assination
    I see Walter Rodney car bombing
    I see Fannie Lou fight for civil rights

    But when I look into the mirror
    I realize that all these people are a part of me.

    Let me know what you think of this one. Peace and Love
     
  2. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2003
    Messages:
    351
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    this was a tyte flow, Welcome..keep it coming!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    welcome!!!!
    nice flow...hope to see more...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome my brutha of flow
    dis was str8 off the hook
    u pose a masterpiece here so happy u here
    to share ya wisdom & knowledge wit us
    make ya self home and enjoy :)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    welcome :wave:Mr. Incognito
    your flow is wonderful
    we carry the torch
    of the ancestor
    just as you compose
    wonderful
    yes please
    share more
    Peace
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    :wave: :spin:

    Welcome to destee! I love the concept of this piece, and the way you put it together. Glad to have you here!
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    this is a very nice flow...:)

    WELCOME!!
     
  8. Mr. Incognito

    Mr. Incognito Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2003
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Thank you all for the love

    Thank you all very much. That was just something that I felt at the time I have to post some more.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    well my dear best friend
    i walk u in hand in hand...
    now i must let you go
    so flow my brother
    as only you can.....
    peace...just around the
    corner
    holla if ya need me...:toast: :kiss:
     
  10. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    very nice flow. Welcome to Destees!!!!!!!!!!!!