Black Poetry : What I See From Afar

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So often, I watch her from a distance
    unnoticed and perhaps unseen
    I am collecting many specific urges
    Some, I hope later to redeem

    I'm building my courage, as we speak
    And I am building up some steam
    Because I am tired of only imagining
    how good it looks without the jeans

    I want to feel how it feels to be close
    And the satisfaction it may bring
    I want an opportunity to hold her
    And show her she’s a queen

    I’ll foster feelings that place her in my arms
    Then move to passion waiting in the wings
    I’ll seduce, awake her, and I’ll then take her
    make her try new incredible things

    Her body has curves that entice me
    symmetry to seductively excite
    She makes herself easy to undress with my eyes
    Because her clothes are always tight

    Striking eyes and smile she furnishes freely
    and they both are always bright
    Being so close to what I see from afar
    It will bring me incomparable delight

    Now as every man, I have desires…
    These desires she has the power to incite
    My interest are incessantly expanding
    If I tried… It would be hard to fight

    She has deemed a means to get into me
    Because she invaded my dream last night
    And my masculine desire is again provoked
    as she moves into my line of sight

    What I See From afar.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome again...nice flow here like how it just slide...smooth:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very smoothly pose'd
    flow on
     
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    Thanks for reading, I'm glad you all liked
     
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    indeed keep droppin da flowz
    showing and given love
    happy u drop dis piece
     
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