Black Poetry : what i need

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Jam, Mar 13, 2001.

  1. Jam

    Jam Member MEMBER

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    I want u
    not just in a sexual way
    no I want u, all of u
    growing closer to u day by day
    feeling the warmth of your spirit
    as our souls intertwine
    becoming one .... divine
    connected at a level
    that most will never comprehend
    unable to decipher
    where I stop and u begin
    hearts beating in synchopation
    ba-boop ... ba-boop
    in tune with ur rhythm
    flowing like a perfect harmony
    as u breathe out I breathe u in
    u are all I need
     
  2. alyce

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    Jam!

    I am humming these lyrics! Sweet, lovely 'peace'.
    Thank you,


    A
     
  3. Nita

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    Amazed by your flow Jammy...
    Keep it up and
    Perfect harmony you will achieve
     
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    got me sway'n to the rhythm of this peace

    luv'n it!

    Destee
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jam... we are poetically in sync

    when i read this piece it reminded
    me of my own piece "Breathe"...
    i loved it!! scribe on poet!!

    Peace&Blessings...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    Oh YEAH!!!

    Bishop likes this one here.....Bring on some more like this one....
    The beacon of the lighthouse is shining on you....
     
  7. Jam

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    Repostin my 1st piece in here .... I plan to add more soon
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght flow got $$RICH$$ flying low with smiles
    keep flowin!
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whatttttt!!! Jam wrote dis...nice

    I like...Nice to see ya expressin yourself
     
  10. Destee

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    Welcome Home Jam

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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