Black Poetry : WHAT I NEED PT.II encore.

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What i need is:
    a story to tell
    a woman a queen
    under her spell
    a body of care
    unique and rare

    what i need is:
    compassion
    lovin wit sweet
    affection
    one who will stand
    beside her lover man
    a soul so divine
    one that will mix wit mine

    what i need is:
    a journey of hope
    to go deep stroke 2 stroke
    make me dance in romance
    prace in the sway and play
    the lover's way

    what i need is :
    one by my side
    keep no secret
    be open & wide
    reside in the well
    of my heart
    comfort , caress
    be my back bone
    when i'm not strong
    understand sharing

    see what i need is :
    is a true queen
    a woman to fulfill my destiny
    of dreams and allow my
    love to shine in glist
    can u do this miss ?

    I wanna be rocked
    body pop lip lock
    none stop i need one
    who can drop it hot
    one who is enchanting
    who can set a blaze
    make me ummm! & crave

    see i need a mate of vision
    one not afraid of missions
    one who love to journey
    wit a bliss of yearning & burning
    unconditional love

    I lone
    far too long
    now i'm singing
    this gentle song
    ready to roam
    and be your own
    give me u if u will
    let us vent inside this thrill
    can u offer all i ask
    beloveth
    let it drip like chocolate wax
    tell me , let me know
    before my love fly and go
    what i need is u
    my Goddess of love :?:

    before i go deeper
    like da love sweeper
    i need to know
    so this continue listen fo mo !
    at the next confession show
    :smokin: :hearts4: :ilu: :hearts4: :luv: :luvv: :luv: :heart: :flowers:
     
  2. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again and again I say the way you portray
    Your desires and what you want the most
    You still amaze me with your skill
    What you want you soon will have
    As long as you stay true to your path
    I will continue to look out for scribes
    on this subject
    :hearts2: :hearts1: :ilu: :luv:
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful part two. :bowdown: Of what you desire.

    see i need a mate of vision
    one not afraid of missions
    one who love to journey
    wit a bliss of yearning & burning
    unconditional love


    what i need is :
    one by my side
    keep no secret
    be open & wide


    This is what I'm talking about. What a man needs.
     
  4. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Part 3 :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :dance3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3: :tongue3:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can try to pick my favorite part one that makes me feel but the whole poem got me in heaven your heart is a gift your love is the treasure....love how this spread the page....now ummm pt 3 you must knew i wanted more

    i read you a thousand times
    plus one more
    and how the pen drops to the
    canvas....
    well you know the rest
    distant shores :wink:

    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Going deeper still into not what you merely want, what you need. And it is a wise person to know what they need and ask for it. I'm deep into this flow, and the depths that your poetic words go. Looking forward to part three brotha.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz soulful2006 and the needs as more drift aboard
    in the confession .

    Thankz HODEE as the confession is laid man much love for the visit

    Thankz poetic justice surely there is a three for the eyez to see stay
    tune as it's written of the needs of heart .

    awe Angel Thank u and indeed cross the shore lines of love is a
    confession as it leak to canvas stay tune as the series continue
    happy u enjoy what i pose .
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz watz as it leak to canvas the confession of needs
    stay tune fo mo of the series
     
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