Black Poetry : WHAT I NEED IS :

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What i need is :
    a woman, a Queen
    to fulfill my dreams
    one that can make
    my body scream
    from the love she bring
    to make my heart sing

    what i need is :
    a heart of care
    one my soul can bare
    and always fare

    someone to caress
    and open to confess
    sho a spirit of gift
    and be humbleness
    give affection and
    know compassion

    what i need is not lust
    but a woman to trust
    one to love squeeze
    enjoy and hug
    give her temple of secrets
    and i be please'd !

    I don't want luxury
    but loyality
    nor do i want memories
    but foreverness
    and i'll give gentleness
    wit my sweet tenderness
    of love

    see i want one whom
    understand know the
    worth of a man
    feel the pain and strain
    and know not to blame
    i want a lover so sweet
    that every night i lone
    have my soul in moan

    I need a Queen who's
    strong and will never
    leave me along yet face
    the daily bite and shine
    on me her comforting light

    what i want , can u give
    so that we can live
    in a spool of togetherness
    under the shade of happiness
    inside my domain above
    the glass house of love

    what i need is real
    and someone to feel
    steal my love take it all
    hear my heart on call
    see
    I want a sista so divine
    a rapture of all tymes
    i need one that will be
    and give her true love to me
    can
    u
    lady , miss , sista queen
    be deep inside all these
    things and bring out what
    i am and share hearts in care
    bare witness in ya soul
    know love as we stroll
    Dance in radiant glist
    and vent sometime in a bliss
    see i need ....?
    stay tune to part II
    as it talk to u Lady ! :love: :deal:

    Dyamondluv ~ Splash
    2005 Nu~Wave Creation
    Da $R
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These things that you need, sounds like what most would want from someone that they love, and loves them in return. I am sure that the lady in question understands. Flow on brotha, looking forward to part two.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice $$RICH$$ I like how you asked " Can she be deep inside all these things " Flow on.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep as the river runs
    wide as the ocean
    we all ask and seek
    this one true thing
    in da morning hear bells
    at night watch the stars dance
    blue as the sky
    true love is hard to find
    once you have it
    hold on to it....
    i love this scribe you brought
    it true and real
    i feed of this desire as well
    across the shores baby :wink:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My My My that's all a sistah like myself can say
    you almost made a girl want to swing your way
    I think you may have taken my heart with this
    but I won't confirm until this piece is finished
    In the mean time you keep writing for me
    So I can tell you what I need......
    A man with a heart of gold
    whose story unfolds before it's told
    A soul that's pure in every way
    But doesn't have a problem with making a mistake
    I need somone to relax the body and soul
    Who doesn't mind if a sistah has a few goals
    I need I want I must have my King
    Could you be that special one for me........ :thinking: :smooch: :thinking:
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to say this too this was simply beautiful my brotha
    You got straight to the point in saying what you want
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spoken like a king. ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Watz what one need is all he ask
    what he offers is all he give , surely it may be heard.

    Thankz HODEE when true love if found one can fulfill
    these things as one offer them the same i know it's real.

    Thankz Angel and cross every shore line lay a heart one
    who ask and wish to know it's all a soul need to asure within
    that love is true & real u can feel it under the sail stay tune !

    Thankz soulful2006 what a heart lone and search can be cross
    shores and bring distant closer yet it ask of things it need to be
    complete without starz and moon light the night is at aloft .......

    Thankz 1poet man ! when one speak as king, feel as king the heart
    need to be treated as king of thy Queeneth u know from the soul.....


    stay tune to pt.II as it continue to speak in vow and a quest ..............
     
  9. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRULY, truly this touched me deep in that special place.
    $$RICH$$ THE CREATOR blessed you with the gift of pointing out what you want and also the gift of being a poet. Thanks for sharing that gift with everyone.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most humbled LadyAfrika , Thank u so much as the journey continues
    and the great needs of thy heart ......................................................
     
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