Black Poetry : What I like about her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 22, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is what I like about her. I like it when she smiles. Showing her teeth. Causing her cheeks to frame her face. She's standing in front of me looking so graceful. It makes me feel so good. When I see she is happy. I really do care a lot about what she thinks. How she feels. Whether she gets to drink from life. Share my cup, and I will fill it with the finest I can find. You and I deserve it. These things are simple things. But the most value to my heart.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet & warm it's beautiful
     
  4. true love

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    very sweet...this is what love is all about.
     
  5. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice

    this poem is real.

    i like it's subtleness and vibe.

    spokin' straight from the heart. i like that in you bruh.

    the simple things, that's what life is all about.

    keep enjoying your love man.

    peace,
    USoul
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet short and simply beautiful....