Black Poetry : what I know

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well if you ask me
    What is love…
    What is love… (not agape)
    I mean
    What I feel is love…
    Yeah, what for real is love…
    And would you have to be…
    In love to feel love…
    Well…

    It's like cool water rushing over you
    Like standing on the edge of the world with a sober view
    It's like soul for two
    And I know you feel it too when you know it's true
    It's explosive boo
    Don't know what you're going through
    Knowing you've got now but
    Don't know where it's going to
    What's it showing you
    When you're past the bling?
    Frontin' like it ain't nothin'
    Knowing it means everything
    Well,
    I could look it up in the dictionary
    Or I could go by what my people show
    I could look it up on the net babe
    Or I could simply go for what I know
    It's like being near you is where I'm s'posed to be
    Like making you smile all the while means the most to me
    You'd be so close to me
    That I'd get confused between the you and the soul of me
    No controlling the need to have her holding me
    I can feel right now the arms of her enfolding me
    We'd be molding the moments that we'd swing
    Caught up in the whirlwind of this love and the joy it'd bring
    I could look it up in the dictionary
    Or I could go by what my people show
    I could look it up on the net babe
    Or I could simply go for what I know

    ©03/00/Michael
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and you seem to know pretty well :D

    Nice
    Tasha
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nuff said u already knoweth da answer keep saying it .
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved the whole peace..but especially loved the ending...
    only way to go...

    K
     
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    GONE WITH THE WIND

    Blow baby, blow!

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    :luv: :luv:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx ya'll.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE SKRYBE...REAL NICE!!!!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice works for me. lol
    Thanx Royal T!
     
  9. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's my favorite line
    or phrase in this too!
    Thanx, Cindy! And;)
    back atcha.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved it