Black Poetry : what I do best…..

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da room sway
    back and forth
    I can feel your touch..
    Missing you in my sleep
    As my day dream comes
    Missing you in my night
    As my day go pass…

    Heart stops
    and memories flow
    Feeling your love
    from afar
    Holding on…
    struggling with the pain
    Of missing you…..

    As you pass each
    verb
    adjective
    with nouns
    I read your letters
    over and over
    Missing you
    is what I do best…
    My paper is wet
    from my tears
    Hard to think
    hard to write
    this poem
    Missing you in
    my soul
    as the pain feels
    Like fire been set…

    Missing you in my sleep
    As my day dream comes
    Missing you in my night
    As my day go pass…

    As the room sways
    Your hands touch my soul
    And holds my spirit
    as my hearts….. just stops
    missing you missing you
    Lawd knows it is hard…

    Cant wait
    Until your home…..
    and I am back in your arms
    missing you is
    what I do best…..
    missing you :bawling:

    A blkangel thang....2004
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Gurl

    This is truly beautiful and well put. Ain't no type of pain like missing someone ya love, right? One of ya best, keep flowin. :coffee:
     
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    This was such a heartfelt scribe. I agree with serenti-poet this is one of the best I've read from you. If it helps to flow on, go for it. Perhaps it will make the hands of time pass swiftly.
     
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    Nicely writen.. i liked it alot...

    One..xx
     
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    Whoa, sis, this is beautiful. I hate to sound like a broken record, cause I just said the same thing on sereniti's poem, but missing someone who means so much to you has got to be the worst pain in the world. Love and peace to you, angel. I feel ya.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for the love and support given
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I like it very well written
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm

    MBA, puts it down once again...
    I really loved this one...I know the feelin,missing the one you love :heart:

    Nice drop mba :peace:
    Nita :heart:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just_Me...glad ya likes

    Nita Mae....thanks for the support
    fo real..my sista

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we can miss the prize of our hearts in ways
    untouched but surely the arms are open awaiting the
    return and they always come to open arms
    i hear ya