Black Poetry : What he said, what she heard!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He said I will be off five weeks.
    She heard he want's to spend it with me.
    He said, he liked women who are affectionate.
    She heard, he likes to cuddle so we will take
    it slow.
    He said he liked her intellectual stimulation.
    She heard, "You stimulate me!"
    He said, he wants a woman who is grounded.
    She heard he is ready to settle down.
    He said I will call you later.
    She heard a committment to call that same day.
    Now don't you know you can't believe everything
    that they say.
    And Women you got to stop misinterpreting
    words, it's deeds not needs that should be
    the proceeds.
    He said I wanted a break from my studies.
    She heard I want to spend some time with you.
    He said Are you available.
    She heard he wants me to be the one.
    What he really wanted to know was "Are you
    busy tonight.
    All this he said , she said, can we just get it
    right.
    He said I will talk to you in the morning as they
    lay.
    She heard, I will stay the night.
    He said, I will enjoy your cooking.
    She heard, he is no longer looking.
    Reading between the lines can be smart.
    But don't play that game when it comes
    to your heart.
    BJS(C)2003

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, indeed games are an invitation to disaster in matters of the heart. I liked the way you put this together.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was on point games ppl play wit the heart....
    likes ya flow...Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya here ......speak on sistah
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks this was truly a labor of love!

    This is something that I feel strongly about.
    Men, say what you mean and mean what you say!
    Women, take it for what it is or leave it alone.
    It is what it is and it ain't what it ain't.
    To many of us are planning a wedding by the second
    date.
    Picking out childrens names after the first episode of
    sex.
    Reading more into the words that are spoken than are
    generally meant.
    Many times we hear what we want to hear.
    But admittedly mixed signals are often sent and received
    on both sides.
    Thanks for reading...MORE TO COME! ;)
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    It's all in the Translation...

    This was an excellent and enlightening scribe...
    let the women all over hear this...our hearts can often
    scramble messages that our "logic" has already
    interepeted...as the truth

    Great read!
     
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    so true indeed..what i said is not what i mean...adding confusion to a relation...for sure
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    word...
    this was a straight jewel
    mind fuel...
    i love this one msb
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fellow scribes!

    I appreciate your love on this vibe. Y'all already know how I feel, so
    nuff said...as my Daddy said "A word to the wise is sufficient!"

    Blessings On Ya House! :shades:
     
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