Black Poetry : What have you done to me?

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love oh love….
    What have you done to me?

    It is so amazing…how you
    changed my life…
    Opening up my eyes…letting me see
    What the world is really about
    For two becoming one……
    As the sadness leaves and the glow of
    Happiness takes control…..

    So amazing as it flows and you
    Never really know……
    Upon the starz you wish and pray
    And its always there…..
    Never really looking
    Just searching…….
    High and low..
    Cryin and wondering
    If it will come…………


    Oh love what you have done to me?

    Happy as I can be..as my dark days pass
    And it takes me in the wind….
    and lifts my soul..
    knowing its my turn…just
    dancing in the rain
    watching the rose bloom
    so full of life… like never before…
    as my wish upon the star have came to be..
    I flow with love in my veins….
    … a love so amazing …
    and finally its all mine and I can sing
    in the rain
    in the snow
    in the sun rays….
    through the winds and
    upon the moon
    and in the rainbow…
    a love that is
    So amazing as it
    flows and you
    Never really know……
    Upon the starz you
    wish and pray
    And its always there…..
    Never really looking
    Just searching…….
    High and low..
    Cryin and wondering
    If it will come…………

    A blkangel thang
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very lovely scribing here wow!!
    the changes one can make to another
    soul is always sweet.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rich glad you likes
    the support and love is great...
    thanks agin
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really love this piece
    not just the way you put it together
    but by what is meant

    /antar
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Antar..thanks for the love on this
    glads ya likes.....your support is great
    thanks agian
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sistah it was tyte scribing
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is truly
    a lovely scribe sis:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Must say the love is well deserved here
    I'm feeling you my sister
    PLEASE keep flowin'

    Peace and love
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..thank you

    Bluewater...i am glad you likes thanks

    twision...thanks for the love.....

    the support and love on this thanks fam
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. GYMEFORTE

    GYMEFORTE Active Member MEMBER

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    1+1=2INLOVE THAT AS THEY SAY IS WHAT MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND..
    BUT IT'S REALLY PEOPLE LIKE YOU.
    MUCHLOVE SISTER.
     
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