Quiet Poetry Lounge : WHAT HAVE I DONE !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What have i done
    to make u mine
    what did i do
    to make u complete

    is it a trick or
    is it a treat
    what is it i done
    to make u feel dis way

    was it the heart
    is it the soul
    was it the wordz that unfold
    was it me or just a game
    as i speak out ya name
    did u know the realm
    can u see beyond the space
    what is it i done

    I know the truth
    I saw it all
    was it the beckon call
    is it just a faze
    so in my hush
    i'm amazed
    to feel u near
    but what was it that
    got u here ?
    what did i do
    is it a desire
    or a destiny
    i'm confused :confused:
     
  2. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whatever it is
    i think she should be
    asking you that question

    tight flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what ever it is
    hummmmm!!!
    mystery of wonderment
    who knows !

    Thankz for the read and reply ya wordz mean a lot to me
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    What you done??
    let it be a mystery
    are you unaware of your ability?
    If she touched ya heart
    and heard your call..
    to decieve now
    wouldnt be her at all..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i knoweth of the great will
    and what the heart feel
    i will never decieve

    seeking to find the truth
    know what's real
    is she truely the deal

    hummmmm!
    mystery of wonderment
    inside my hush
    my secret untold

    wordzzzzzzz of wise spoken in ink
    i see it , feel it and know it now
    thank u for the love given i'm greatful
     
  6. MORE

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    :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: scribe, scribe brother scribe, this was good writing!:toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey MORE........the mental thinking of it all and what was done
    yet the wonderment of what is make u think openly Thankz sis.
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Ohh, the fun
    of what you've done
    mended the pieces
    of a broken heart..
    shall we ever part
    know a piece of rose
    ya posed
    grows in me..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' my
    let it shine
    through n' through
    and feel da mix
    of sweetness bliss
    of the roses
    1 white for hope
    1 red for love
    1 black for beauty
     
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    egyptianeyes Active Member MEMBER

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    beautiful Rich. Don't second guess yourself. The heart wants what the heart wants... Peace, Egypt
     
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