Black Poetry : WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Eric Mitchell, Sep 29, 2005.

  1. Eric Mitchell

    Eric Mitchell Active Member MEMBER

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    SO YOU WENT AHEAD AND DID IT. AND NOW I FEEL THE PAIN YOU TRIED TO DESCRIBE WHEN I TOLD YOU ABOUT HER. THE SAME KIND OF TEARS THAT YOU CRIED NOW WET MY FACE AND DEPLETES MY SOUL. MY MIND WANDERS IN HORRIBLE PLACES WITH VISIONS OF HIS HANDS UPON YOU, VISIONS OF HIS LIPS UPON, AND THE UNTHINKABLE. I CAN’T LOOK AT YOU RIGHT NOW, THE WAY YOU COULDN’T LOOK AT ME. IT’S BECAUSE THE PAIN IN MY CHEST INTENSIFIES, AND MY STOMACH THREATENS REBELLION WHEN YOU’RE IN MY SIGHT. IS THAT WHY YOUR STOMACH ALWAYS HURTS? HYPOCRITE THAT I AM, I DON’T SEE YOU THE SAME WAY AS BEFORE. YOUR SKIN FEELS DIFFERENT. YOUR SENT HAS CHANGED, AND YOU SEEM UNFAMILIAR TO ME. SO YOU WENT AHEAD AND DID IT. ****! SO WHAT NOW?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep mental move of feelings expressed ......loving ya flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great description of the what goes around comes around scenerio. Your words felt real.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, ...as the workd turnes, and it's never a good feeling, when it turns on us.
    you laid this piece out on the line
     
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