Black Poetry : What Happened?

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come here..
    What happened?
    Why are u crying friend
    What? she did it again?
    I told u she was no good 4 u
    but I am here 4 u until the end

    Please.......please....
    slow down and relax
    calm down and tell me everything


    No..... u caught her in ur bed
    with ur brother? What the F..K?

    And she just looked at u
    and kept her stride
    and didn't give u a second thought
    and she continued 2 ride?


    Then what?
    Did u just walk out the door?
    Or did u beat ur brother down
    and slap that no good whore?

    Why are u smiling?
    I see that look on ur face
    I've seen it before..
    What did u do friend?

    Whazzup with the silence?
    Do u want me 2 guess? No?

    ok..then tell me ...


    ( this is what my friend said.....)


    I saw her on top of my brotha
    and she didn't even look surprised
    when I crept in the room
    and gazed at me with her eyes

    She even started to get wilder
    and act a fool and make noise
    so I put on my sunglasses
    and she noticed my poise

    And I smiled at her ***
    and she looked scared then
    so I walked outside
    loving how she seen the evil grin


    I went 2 my car
    got my ax out the trunk
    and went back inside with evil in my heart
    full of all kinds of demonic junk

    I'm tired of dis ***** doing this 2 me
    I can't let her get away with it
    that hoe smiled back at me!!!!!

    So I slipped in all nice
    and quiet
    and my brother
    was in the shower

    She was lying back
    smokin a joint
    and her eyes closed
    dazed up to the point
    that she never even looked
    up 2 see what had become of me
    guess she thought that she was in the clear

    uuuhuh ...***** you'll see!!!!

    I walked over to her as sweet
    as I can be
    and leaned over
    and kissed her on the cheek

    she saw me and was shocked
    like a ghost was in her room
    but I covered her mouth
    with a towel
    and she knew this was her doom

    I got the ax
    and started to chop off
    her lying lips first
    and then her lower lips second

    chopped off every part of her
    piece by piece
    and laughed softly
    so my brother didnt catch me

    and I wrapped her in the sheets she f..ked on
    then I put her *** in the trunk
    and I came straight here
    cause I needed to think instead..........
    and see what I'mma do to my brother
    tell me friend..... got any ideas in ur head ?



    Moral of the story is......
    sooner or later a cheater gets it back
    if u are
    a cheater hopefully urs won't
    be with an ax....


    sometimes cheaters need to be told
    that thinking they can get away with that ****
    is getting pretty old......

    and so is that girl in the trunk!!!!
    LoL



    I know ya'll laughing yo *** off:rolling:
    :peace: :peace: :yo: :yo: :sand:
     
  2. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 4 reading and feeling it Sherykah
    I wonder what he will do 2 his brotha.....
    LOL
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    got me rolling on the floor...I should thought about this the one time I caught my girl with someone else:grin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis sound like a past thang i've been in once she was no good
    and i was saved by a new love .....u speak out loud ....flow head
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Bishop for feeling me my friend...
    I appreciate the love....
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this poem best i've heard in a long *** time :) :)
     
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    I dunno....:eek: This kinda scared the crap outta me, not that I am a cheater (which I'm not) I just hate violence in any form. At any rate you're a great writer...


    I'm just sayin...
     
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