Quiet Poetry Lounge : What Feelings Can Do...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's hard to believe
    what feelings can do
    to a mind...You begin to
    question what has captured you
    wondering if what has you snared
    is in fact true
    What is real exists, if you let it.
    Love can be like a virtual reality
    a dreamlike state that you are
    afraid to be awakened from
    An enticing twinkling star
    that you've admired from afar
    and figure it's too distant to touch
    in reality, because the reality is virtual
    yet you desire to feel it oh, so much
    But unlike that star, this love is within
    your grasp, all you have to do
    is to convince yourself that the love
    is true, and will not hurt you
    I....
    Have some feelings like this too
    how come love just comes up out of the blue
    but it must be fate, destiny somehow
    that our paths have led us together, not
    when we were innocent, but now
    after we've lived...and learned
    I suppose life had to prepare
    us for each other, so that
    we would know enough to take care
    of fragile feelings from the heart
    The reality has begun
    so let's start....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i know this so well ,feelings can take u there and back
    well said sis....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, they can Rich. Thank you for responding so brotha.
     
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    sweet and describes some feelings of mine at the moment! keep droppin em like it's hot!!
    :weights:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those feelings can be something else, can't they Floreal? Thank you so much poet, I will try.
     
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    Really nice. I can relate to the descriptions within.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Sodwn2earth for responding so.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you must be inside my head cause sometimes this is how i feel. nice flow i felt the need to comment on this.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I suppose most have been down this road, thank you for responding so nevar.
     
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    Feelings are like emotional bless
    Like the first doctors visit
    Or your first kiss
    Its a deep spirit that caresses the mental
    Goes deep to the temple
    From me to my kin folk
    The feelings are so hard for me
    I twiddle my thumbs sometimes in disbelief
    Sometimes I longate on certain situations
    Feelings get the best
    Thats all that I am saying
    I...I....I....I
    Dont even know where to begin
    Like the song lovers and friends
    We together now
    Your right cross have passed
    Were together now
    I need you more
    No pumpkins
    But your my cinderella now!!
     
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