Black Poetry : What does "I'm sorry" appear to be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Nov 22, 2004.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you stand there
    pain hiding behind glass panes
    water rising to the top
    and all I can
    do is stand there and watch
    and wait and wonder what
    the storm will be like...

    tongue dressed in another morality
    speaking a language your heart
    doesn't want to understand

    I opened my mouth and
    closed my thoughts and
    here I go again...giving birth to your
    pain.

    (c)2004 blakverb
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is wonderful to read your words again been a while

    very deep scribe and very relevant to my life.

    i likes ya know this already welcome home hope this means you will be

    around more.....Angel
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen,

    you know me. who knows how long I'll be back around. I'll try and not let things get in the way of "coming home". Things are hectic right now. At this moment writing is (as always) my oasis. Thank you for the read and I'll try to post more. Believe that.

    blak
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your welcome...hmmm thas a coincidence how are poems reach as they did

    you are a wonderful poet my brother....and I shall look for more from you

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak i like the flow of you words and i will enjoy reading more from you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome my brutha love the scribe here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing quite like a blakverb drop. So, much depth laden in every line. I guess sorry doesn't make an impression sometimes. Flow on.
     
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    Simple, deep and dope. Nice to read you again, brothah. Diggin this one a lot.
     
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