Black Poetry : What do you really want?

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What do you really want?


    Is all beauty so cruel that it denies it's true purpose, or does

    FATE decide in some seemingly unfair way to misguide two hearts

    into close proximity, only to keep them at bay with painful

    promises of blissful samples filled with sweet somethings of what

    COULD

    have been?



    Deeper and fuller are the expressions of want and have.....

    I HAVE need for nights nostalgic with necessities nestled closely

    to never examined WANT of those things unshared and

    unsettled.


    Unshared is to uncovered as tasted is to

    smothered....appreciated and NEVER wasted....thought upon

    debated ill-fated....I see the color of moments moving me.


    Yes.


    My I is wide open and captured by you who make the BLIND see

    the impossible and the DEAF hear the songs of angels.

    Open your mouth and sing.

    Glory.

    Touch the taste made to savor slowly enjoyed is this

    flavor.....MOUNTAIN GROWN and good to the last drop.

    Wide open and nothing can save her.





    WHAT DO YOU REALLY WANT?
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YAYYY QUIN!!! :)

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe ya pen strolls sweet
     
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    (Is all beauty so cruel that it denies it's true purpose, or does
    FATE decide in some seemingly unfair way to misguide two hearts
    into close proximity, only to keep them at bay with painful
    promises of blissful samples filled with sweet somethings of what
    COULD have been?)

    You got me hook, line and sinker with the beginning, alone.
    This is sooooooo emotive..........What does the love, the passion,
    the unknown force that pulls two souls together want?

    Very good question...........what will be the outcome, an even
    better question.

    Beautiful flow,
    Your Sage
     
  5. For NLN

    For NLN Active Member MEMBER

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    What do you really want?
    What really do you want?
    I hope to succeed
    And I succeed to hope
    To do what I love
    And to love what I do
    Hardwork mixed with real feelings
    Mixed feelings real with hard work
    I want success for my life and to show it for myself
    Just to see my mom smile and to know it's for herself
    That's what any real man would really want for himself!

    - Mr. Chuki Obiyo (For NLN)
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one i savored, truly beautiful :wave:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful flow
    Peace
     
  8. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    wow, I could drown in your flow....I would want to drown in a flow like this.
     
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    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    breathless

    whoo, i can barely catch my breath after this one. you write my heart.
     
  10. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Play-You know I love all the attention you give me.Thank you.


    Rich-I don't really think you're given enough props for what you are to us.Thank you.

    Sage-Engulf yourself in that shared thing and prepare for the joining of our journey.Thank you.


    NLN-It always is a pleasure to be given luv by a new colleague.Thank you.

    Dream Weaver-Your strong prescence is gratifying.Thank you.

    Blue Water-Your words and time taken surrounds me each time I see you comment on my work.Thank you.

    Justerika-I'm new here and enjoy your words immensely.Thank you.

    Emrod89-I'm not here to be better than anybody....just better.
    So seeing you comment on my work is so cool to me.Thank you.

    Thank you for adding to my well everybody.

    Q1
     
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