Black Poetry : What do u do ?

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mind mixed
    twisted wind
    shadow of doubt
    what do u do !
    when the emotion
    run in a spinner
    now a past winner
    u pound ova dinner
    what do u do !
    as mental thoughts
    seal in the chamber
    of no hope
    yet peace be within
    what do u do !
    when u reach the mark
    and tyme has past
    where u once stood

    The action of fazed faded
    myth lay on the tongue
    yet words sit still
    to the right is no justice
    ova at the left betrayal
    what do u do !
    as one look on from afar
    space become smaller
    like a room of four corners
    one search harder
    seeking answers yet untold
    forth one can't open up
    becomes weak & weaker

    cry for mercy
    inside self slumber
    where once a fighter
    rumbled
    never mumbled
    da feelings seem to
    crushed
    it's da action of
    RedRum:(
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    redrum.:) it's been awhile.

    what do you do when the weight of the world is upon you...and you can't see tomorrow for yesterday's hue...and what other people think of you. what do you do when pressure decisions weigh you down and all around you see the jones acting like your questions are none existent...and you're missing the sense of what IS. what do you do when today is all YOU and you still don't know what to do? WHAT DO YOU DO?

    ~exactly~

    a thinker. THANKS $$RICH$$
     
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    hey Baller u felt this one ......thankz for hitting dis flow
     
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    Rich..thought provoking...poem..what do you do when you know wrong doesn't make a right...you've been hurt but still want to do the dirt?
     
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    what do u do
    when wrong don't make a right
    what do u do ??

    when ya feelings been hurt and dirt on ya mind
    what do u do ????

    forth stand in da waters of tyme
    what hurts heals in tyme
    what do u do !
    cross no lines of dirt
    forth the ash will blow in ya eye
    what would u do
    when the heart is down and pain strike

    u pose a vision of mental and weave out the broken tongue

    Rico powerful words u pose ......what do u do !?
    wow!Thanks 4 da read family
     
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    very tyte flow, Rich
    def. feelin' this
     
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    thankz skrybe7 it was my thinking out loud
     
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    wow...tyte flow...
     
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    LovelyG .............thankz sistah
     
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    Hey baby!

    The question of the ages...you brought it to the pages. But, the answer sometimes eludes us when all around is just confusion...just remember that ...
    "God doesn't send you to a battle empty handed", he will give you everything that you need..."If you refuse to sit in the seat of the scornful..."YOU ARE A TRULY WISE AND WONDERFUL HUMAN BEING'.
    And I am so proud to call you my family!
    Loved this but then I always do...

    Blessings On Ya house!
    *Winding up vacation, but I had to come and see about my Destee family and drop something so y'all know I am still on the team!
    Smooches:kiss: