Black Poetry : what do I do with these feelings? (voice from a dead end street)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (For The Sisters)

    this is driving me out of my mind?
    why is life so unfair?
    why is it every man i meet is either married,
    only wants one thing or is looking for a man just like me?
    why can't i find someone to love?
    i know i'm cute. i know i can cook.
    and the love, man i've got so much good love
    to give that it’s running out of my ears
    but these feelings? what do i do with them?
    what do i do with a heart that is so full of love
    that it is rotting, decaying; plagued by loneliness.
    what do i do with the focus of my mind that is
    bounced from sidewalk, to alley, to the brother at
    the next desk over 'cause it cannot isolate and
    fixate on mr. right? where is he?
    what do i do with a body that desires a touch
    and heart strings that desire a tug
    and love that desires…love.
    what do i do with these feelings?
    what do i do with my love?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte what a way to open up this new WON !! forum
    flow on and drop all ya scribes it's yours brutha
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich - now you know the bruthas have a sensitive side for the sistas. had to drop one for them. thanks again Bruh. :spinn:
     
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    gosh you are so wow..
    a very thought felt poem
    wonderful
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I glad you could relate Sista Bluewater. I bow to my sista's for dealing with what they have to deal with - us!
     
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    Yes, what does one do with those feelings? This one causes me to pause and think....keep writing like you do.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much for the read sista. glad it caused you to think... be blessed
    k

     
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    such sensitivity you do not usually see in men. Please covet and nurture this part of yourself many rewards shall you reap. tUFFY :luvv:
     
  9. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love sis. thanks for the read! i'll keep seeking this side of me... and allowing it to flourish.!!!

    peace

     
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