Black Poetry : What do I call this --- I have so much to say

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ms_MochaB, Feb 8, 2006.

  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blank stares; distant glares
    life interrupted; like volcanic eruptions
    you speak of things to come
    I still remember the things that have passed
    you try to block me out
    now I'm mad, so I scream and shout
    I leave in anger
    you tell our business to strangers
    I don't talk to your for dayz
    when you call my mind is in a sleepy haze
    we talk I agree, but I don't remember
    the next day we're fine
    at least in your mind
    I'm trying to understand why you ok with me
    I question your joy
    you tell me the story
    how we talked and now we're fine, at least in your mind
    I say I don't remember, now nothing is solved
    we go back to hurtful words and forgotten songs
    I feel bad
    now I'm sad, so I say I'm sorry
    you say ok, but then you ignore me all day
    I feel lonely sad and neglected
    you tell me anger was yet detected
    now I'm feeling all rejected
    I leave again, wanting you to follow
    instead you swallow my guilt and stay where you are
    now here I am again sitting lonely, in my car
    finally my phone rings, you ask me what's wrong
    I tell you I don't want to talk about it on the phone
    so I send you an e-mail, laying it all on the line
    even to the point of describing jell-o in your spine
    then I get weak towards the end
    describing you as my best friend
    seeking to work things out
    aplogizing for the earlier screams and shouts
    two days later you respond --
    like u don't want to talk on the phone,
    I don't want to talk by e-mail!
    Anger rekindled, because I considered my words fair
    you cut me down, now we're beyond repair
    day one- no calls
    day two- calls for questions about kids only
    day three- how long are you going to act like this
    day four- can you come by
    day five-this is a nice movie, you won't be scared
    day six-laughing together as a family unit
    day seven-asking for forgiveness of the completed act

    experiencing a love breakdown
    acquiring love rebuilt
    relationship hindered
    based on ones guilt
    but now we've come to understand
    why we fell in love
    next time choose words wisely
    or we'll end this on a bridge --- with a shove!
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alright now ms. mocha welcome back sister enjoyed this flow flow on sista./
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like a rollacoaster ride up and down
    round and round love hurt is love gain
    is like divide to mend ....this was deep!
     
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    Mountains and valleys
    Peaks and plimmets
    Heaven and Hell!!!!!!!

    I feel you my sister.
    I like the way you write.
    So Blunt. So naked and expressive

    Another Good one mocha


    Peace and love
    twision
     
  5. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Nevar ... Rich .... and Twision ...
     
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    Wow sis this was real deep
    Feeling you Mocha
    Much Love-Love is crazy
     
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    Dam girl I'm glad you guys worked things out:heart:
    Were you going to push him over the bridge for real?:wink:
    Great poem and very heartfelt!
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This scribe was deep...felt like i was experiencing everything in that poem wit u....go head now, fiyah...lol


    Keep the flow going

    word from

    MzSoulll :cool:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When harsh words come out, sometimes we say things we don't mean, and sometimes those words have an even deeper meaning. Good to take some time to see what it all really means. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    You indeed have a lot to say.
     
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