Quiet Poetry Lounge : What Chu Thinkin Bout?

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  1. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wut Chu Thinkin Bout?


    I sit back and wonder wut is goin on in yo mind
    U smile at me but where exactly are yo thoughts aligned?
    I wonder...
    Is expressing yo feelings such a hard thing to do?
    Or are u not sure if what u feel is true?
    It must be because of they way u look at me
    The way u smile..I kno u feelin my style
    Make up yo mind and come to the light
    Cause I wonder...
    What u think about when u go to sleep at night
    I kno its me... with me confidence is nothing u see
    I kno u feelin me but it would help to show it more o-pen-ly
    Heart filled wit emotions of glee... i can see when u look at me
    Tell me whats on your mind girl
    No need to be shy cause u can talk to me
    In my thoughts u walk with me
    Being forward is the only way u will get what u most desire
    I kno its me... I can see it in ur face, I light ur fire
    I kno its me... holdin yo hand in the halls
    I kno its me... me being yo man n all
    U kno how I feel.. its been expressed on a daily basis
    U can tell me girl.. I'm here to touch, not an oaisis
    Don't be complacent.. the lable close friends is only a cloak fo being scared
    I dont bite, I come with open arms.. to feel my love u best ta be prepared
    What Chu Thinkin bout?
    Where yo mind at?
    I kno I've captured it... all I ask is fo u to share with me yo mind set.






    LOWKEY C.E.O OF LYNDON STREET POETS

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    -lowkey



    p.s.

    U MAY CLAP NOW :shades:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Getting that "friend" to just open up so there can be more....I really liked the conversational tone of this piece poet.
     
  3. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u


    I'm goin thru this rite now as u can see



    love 360




    LOWKEY C.E.O OF LYNDON STREET POETS

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  4. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    love this

    brotha is showing that deep lyndon thought ...he makes me proud to be a lyndon street poet,,,,, we looking for members yawl.... :love:
     
  5. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love 360 my brotha

    we are Lyndon street poets

    from the same womb..... we manifest poetic creativity



    much love



    -low key



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i feel you when the communication line seem close
    and the mind rumbling of what's up ! gently it will come out
    and u will feel the mindset of a dear friend daily in time just
    hold on as the gates open .....i feel u on this fo real.
     
  7. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u RICH

    I really needed some words of encouragement

    I'll wait it out and see
     
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