Black Poetry : what cha know bout love?

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What cha know bout love?
    Nothing, you can’t know true love if you’ve never felt it
    That’s like picking out a flower blindfolded and never smelled it
    Love is that first smile, and how yours heart melted
    When you looked in her eyes and the new feelings you dealt with
    Love is pure like a painter’s blank canvass,
    Love is what you make it, a feeling that you can’t miss
    But love can be dangerous in the hands of the evil
    Cause love also has the power to mislead and deceive you
    It’s easy to say “I love you” and many will believe you,
    But love’s only real, when two loves are equal

    What cha know bout romance?
    Yeah, you ain’t got a clue
    Call her up at work just to say “I love you”
    A note on the pillow, “I’d put nothing above you”
    Little pet names like “honey dew” and “boo boo”
    It doesn’t take much to let her know that you’re true
    A single red rose is only a dollar thirty-two
    Spray your cologne on her clothes, to remind her of you
    Invite her to do **** with you and your crew,
    She don’t really wanna go, she just want you to ask her to
    Run her a bath or two, make sure she laughs with you
    Yo, you provide then she’ll ride with you

    What cha know bout passion?
    Not much I bet,
    Cause if it ain’t wet, it ain’t ready yet
    You start at the neck with gentle tongue play
    Then make your way to her mental doorway
    And that’s when you say “I’ve been waitin’ all day,
    To bless you with a taste of my verbal 4play”
    I listen to you whimper, as I speak to your soul
    Yearning for your flesh as this saga unfolds
    So I toggle my flows to match the rhythm of your heartbeat
    Then steadily massage you pedigree til we both peak
    Don’t speak, let me swim in the depths of your consciousness
    Then consciously become adept to the rest of your raunchiness

    What cha know bout making love to woman?
    Put cha d*ck in, then take it out when ya finished?
    It’s this type of thinkin’ that makes real love diminish
    Love-making is 90% cerebral, so if ya mindset’s feeble
    Your return rate will equal
    Negative, nil, no cheap thrills, no sequel
    You have to indulge in the pure essence of a woman
    Uninhibited love lessons are the truest
    Anatomy explorations with speech fluids,
    Fingers guide hands through mammary gland movements
    Grove with smooth shifts into positional flips and leg lifts,
    Bodies contort yet the passion persist
    Freedom without risk, oasis at long last
    Feels like eternity, yet only short moments have passed
    Disguised in the mask of smut and vulgarity
    Is this little thing called “love”,
    And that’s my reality.

    Copyright 2004
    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And that is a reality ...I think ...but what about the saying:
    "Love, don't love...nobody"?
    maybe we should seek another word for this thing called "love"
    Beautiful work of art poet...for the love in your realm, is in the right place.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop i can tell a life story on da word call LOVE ...
    flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's something you don't know unless you've experienced it, true. And once you truly have, there are so many ways to express it, and you have laid down the abcs of it so well. Your queen is quite lucky indeed. Enjoyed the write.
     
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    Poet you could publish a book with 500 pages...
    and on EVERY PAGE
    Print this poem...


    It seems you really know about this thing called love...

    Wonderfully insightul work!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cardio: You are working out in this form poet! :hearts4:
    I think I have found another poet to add to my I want whatever they were drinking list :donttell:
     
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