Black Poetry : what causes a cloud mass?

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What causes the grays and the blues
    And other gentle hues
    What holds it suspended in the sky
    Floating
    Nonchalantly
    Between heaven and earth
    For the gratitude
    Of you and I

    What keep these gases from breaking away
    Drifting…like little cotton balls
    Along the breezes of each day
    Why don’t they dissipate
    As the winds push them
    On
    On
    Along the periphery
    Of right-angled
    Windbreaks
    That clouds take
    When raining chaos
    Upon sunshiny days

    What placed the breeze upon the air
    What made it play a serenade
    Along the boobies of my hair
    And when each puff
    Again
    Takes flight
    Stirring the feathers
    Of each day
    I’ll search the lands
    High and low
    For gentle breezes
    Flowing my way

    What causes the sun to shine
    Giving warmth to one and all
    As mornings rise
    And evenings fall
    And noon-time’s glow
    Do touch the soul

    What causes a cloud mass?
     
  2. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm?

    It is visible tiny water droplets and or ice crystals suspended in to the atmosphere. Eloquently described BALLER! Nice piece!
    One_Love
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Are...

    You are my :angel1: This one is hot :hot:
    lovin your flow... i really liked this one
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BALLER WHERE YA BEEN !
    YA BACK AND ON FIRE
    I LIKE THIS PIECE MAKES ME THINK
    AND WONDER.......GREAT JOB!!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BACK...

    one_love, Desert Storm...thanks for the love.
    $$RICH$$, had to run off to northern cali for a minute. wrote this as i was decending into a bed of clouds that sent my plane into convulsions.:) but, hey! i woke today...that's a good thing. PEACE.
     
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