Black Poetry : What can you do?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dior Robynsonne, May 19, 2004.

  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit back
    and I observe the sad
    state of affairs
    America is in.
    We used to be the
    'Pillar of the Community' back in
    the day,
    but now we're a 2004 A.D.
    Sodom and Gommorah,
    steeped in ignorance and the
    strong stench of sin.
    Its amazing how our
    values have decreased.
    We are quick to condemn a serial rapist and
    murder, but seemingly turn a blind
    eye to things like the sacred
    institution of marriage to be polluted and
    made available to the same sex.
    What kind of state are we in?
    Do we not realize that the earth shrieks daily
    to God,
    because of the unecessary blood that has been
    shed and now seeps into her rich soil?
    Do we not realize the time is
    coming where we all stand before
    the divine and answer to all of our crimes?
    What can we do?
    What can we do?
    That is the question that plagues a
    few.
    So I ask you all today.
    With the state we are in,
    What can you do?

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wyne" Publishing
    ~Capucine
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dior, You Are Speaking Profound Insight With Every Line.


    Keep scribing, because I for one am listening.


    ~j
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well sounding like a broken record....
    i love how u posed this
    you are a very insightful Poet
    keep them coming
    nice drop..again
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma thank you so much. Your words are an inspiration to me all the time. God bless.
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you angel and you could never sound like a broken record!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This country is in so much hot water, that it has boiled out and evaporated a long time ago. Another tight drop, and much to think about.
     
  7. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again thank you so much ma. Your an inspiration.