Black Poetry : what can u do for me !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what can u
    do for me
    can u cook feed me
    da treat
    give me a meal
    wit erotic please
    can u wrap ya
    sweet natur around me
    cook me something sweet
    can u make my heart
    skip a beat
    what can u do for me !
    love wit body and soul
    bake me into a butter roll
    can u flip me like pancakes
    or wax me in da make
    can u whisper in my ear
    tell me how u care
    can u show compassion
    wit hope and da blessin
    can u dance in romance
    can u listen wit pride
    or saddle up for da
    long ride
    can u Lady , can u !
    what can u do for me
    let me feel da blazzin
    of ya tune
    can u meet me in da room
    can u call me at night
    take my heart away in da
    light
    i wanna know what u can do for me
    will it be real
    something i can feel
    what is it u can do
    to please me
    will u use extreme measure
    will i feel da warmth of pleasure
    is it a mission or emotion
    wit it leave a sweet devotion
    what is it u can do Lady !
    :idea:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i will be a good lil Angel
    on dis one...cuz ummmm
    it can get hot up in this thread...
    tight one Rich...but imma be good:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    make it hot
    i wanna sweat
    get this threaD
    drippy & wet
    i wanna know
    what u can do
    being good
    is cool & true
    but i wanna know what
    one can do
    i'm ready to bring da heat
    dis a new erotic treat
    dat's all u got is good hummmm!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can
    bake you
    flip you
    Rub you
    up and down
    Make you shine…
    Ridin cowboy…
    Bring ya holla hoop
    Lets play in the fire
    Love you body and soul hold
    Your spirit in my hand
    and mold you the perfect fantasy
    Have you take a trip
    when you don’t need to
    Coming
    Compassion ally
    Tender ly
    Warmth of pleasure of
    Extreme measure
    Sweet and meek
    I be your treat
    Devotion of bliss
    Release upon you
    Do you need more….
    Cook
    Bake
    Freak
    Just make you weak
    Inhale as I exhale the sweetness pain
    Say my name as I scream yours
    Bring da heat....i play in the fire.... :help:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tell me more
    of what u can do
    make me hot
    make me sweat
    let get sticky & wet
    make me holla
    say ya name
    but know i get extreme
    blaze da same
    i love da heat
    da fire blaze
    tell me what u can do for me !
    wooooooweeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    please, somebody do something quick...
    what a nice piece I was really feeling the flow in this, all the way to the end.
     
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    yeah !!!
    ladies do it quick
    tell me something
    slick
    make me feel da beat
    slap it on me sweet
    let me know what u can do
    don't let slip away from u
    thank u queentswana
     
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    Seems to me
    there isn't much more
    that anyone can
    have in store
    you've already been
    awaken
    shaken
    baked
    and stirred
    don't know
    what else your
    body can take
    perhaps next year
    I'll get inside your cake
    and pop out for you
    yea, that's what I'll do....
    Until then, I'll be good
    and sing this song,
    hope your birthday wishes
    last the whole year long!
     
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    next year dat's real sweet
    out the cake nice treat
    but today i need to know
    what one have in store
    i wanna be rocked
    socked even pop
    i need something hot and sweet
    soft lovely and meek
    i wanna be iced diced and fried
    i want it sticky , milky and
    extreme to make me scream
    i need it to be a fix of suga
    chocolate mix
    i want it fancy and free
    lay it on me
    i wanna know what one can do
    and feel it deeply too
    so shake , bake and rump my
    soul i want da body fold
    what can one do for me !
    i want more
    i need more
    can u give it
    can u hang
    can u make me say yo name !
     
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    Let me take you
    to the bed
    I'll add some more
    spice to this thread
    Plant some sugar
    on those lips
    lick and suck
    those fingertips
    Put some
    whipped cream
    all over you
    oh, the thangs
    that I could do
    Make you think that
    you're in a dream
    but when you hear
    yourself scream
    you'll know it's real
    so, here's the deal
    I'll give you something
    you can feel
    ride you
    guide you
    make you slide to
    the left
    buck to the right
    make you moan all
    through the night....

    Is that what you mean?