Quiet Poetry Lounge : WHAT CAN I DO....in Hope

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    After the rise
    to hearts suprise
    from a maze of flood
    the cry in hub tears
    the land i stand for
    hope in the mist my
    love reveal in need
    i plea in the grace
    we face from poverty
    the struggle become
    a stain , harder to tame
    open my roof to loft in
    what can i do
    pray daily that is will be
    and given in the cry of plea
    take what i can share hand n' hand
    give common wealth
    to talk and walk befriend to
    brothering kin in hope today
    as i get ready for arrival. :number1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hope, pray, give all that you can give to those that you know in your heart truly need it. I feel our hearts opening up, can you? I can't put any more words to describe what I feel for this one. I'll just say I feel the vibe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz it's all one can do in hope of ..........
     
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    the vibe of relief finally a ending to a new beginning..this sorta makes you think like the morning flower opening yanno...i don't know but i likes this

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    yes relief to thy arriving hope for the spirit has been shaken but faith is still afloat
    thankz Angel for the visit and warmth to this maze ....
     
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