Black Poetry : What can I be..................

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What can I be……..


    Goddess, Fair Queen, a rose just to say the least
    Uncomparable so rare tho, your beauty can I play the beast
    Can I be a verse in the special love song your body charismaticly sings
    Why don’t you play me like a fiddle to enjoy the rhythm that I can bring
    Better yet, Ill be the favorite negligee you wear repeatedly
    Solely for me to know your every curve, and how your body needs me
    Just label me the medication that cures your every ill
    Can I be your sun, for only my warmth your body feels
    If you don’t hear anything else that comes from me
    Ask yourself , then fill in the blank for you what can I be!

    Lj
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u are all you are what u are
    this was tyte
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be willing to be someone's everything...wow, this was a lovely write.