Khasm13 : what can be said...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    what can be said
    for all da crackheads
    with knotty knots on top of their head
    and bellies not feed
    but plenty of crack smoke
    feeling up their hostile nostrils
    until they choke
    giving up hope
    for da rock of power
    da wild white lady devours
    da soul of mice and men
    stealing ya moms tv
    for loot to spend
    is this a battle
    that most folks win?

    what can be said
    for da teenage moms
    and pops
    dat drop living bombs
    non-stop
    youth stolen for a
    p##sy pop
    jimmy is
    hard as a rock
    with no stopc##k
    just another shorty
    on da block
    with no pop
    or as others call him
    father
    abandoned seeds
    left for societies slaughter
    taught misconceptions
    since your pops erection
    this is our future
    that our hopes are resting
    on
    do we even care
    what's wrong?

    what can be said
    for poet's that pen poems
    just for views
    and not for self
    cause popularity rules
    da tools of human nature
    schools us fools
    and blinds tru growth
    so that tru creativity gets abused
    and us do or die poets lose
    while getting cast aside like holy shoes
    cause we become fake like da news
    at 10 o'clock
    will the madness ever stop?

    what can be said
    for black folks only consuming
    and not producing
    cause this stat is dooming
    us to the dire straights
    as we act sedate
    not even peeping our fate
    if this trait contunes
    worried about menus
    instead of business plans
    and ways to expand
    we will be [email protected]
    knowledge can be crammed
    but instead we sink deeper into
    da quicksand
    hand in hand
    with capitolism
    and desprately needing an exorcism
    from our possesions
    that we bank life off of
    not character and heart
    but that's just not us that's a lot of
    people
    who's plans for life are feeble
    cause they weeble and wobble
    and then they fall down
    the grand prize question is
    when you fall down
    who da hell is around?
     
  2. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, again, you did it:

    if this trait contunes
    worried about menus
    instead of business plans
    and ways to expand
    we will be [email protected]
    knowledge can be crammed
    but instead we sink deeper into
    da quicksand
    hand in hand


    says it all. says it all
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "what can be said"

    I'm speechless from the awesome
    blow of this powerful piece.

    ...definitely
    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  4. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    randee--thanks for da love...
    u r one of the many poets on dis board
    that i have my eyes on...

    coco--like randee said, it's ya'll women
    dat have da power...i'm just hopin
    to bask in sum of it :)
    thanks gurl

    peace
    khasm
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    teach it khas!!!!!!!!....this is so damm tyte....i had to read it again :D
     
  6. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    your knowledge...and the way you flow with it
    this was really gripping,

    JustE
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    swtt-- thanks sis, btw...glad to see you in da open forum too...
    this type of education you can't get in schools :)

    juste--thanks gurl, these are just some of the thoughts that i had today looking at this blasted monitor...lol thanks again
    peace
    khasm
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what can be said
    for poet's that pen poems
    just for views
    and not for self
    cause popularity rules ....what can be said
    for black folks only consuming
    and not producing
    cause this stat is dooming ....
    once again u hav outdone urself.....magnificent piece ......keep it coming cause i'm consumin all the knowledge ur spittin...
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eyes wide open
    My bruther
    quote:
    "the grand prize question is
    when you fall down
    who da hell is around?"
    Peace
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks cypher...good to see you back
    around these parts...don't be a stranger man :)

    blue--cats is always around when your moving up
    but most of those same cats are nowhere around
    when ya headed down...another one of mans
    f#cked up traits :(...thanks gurl
    peace
    khasm
     
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