Poetry Critiques : What are we here for?

[nevar]

What are we here for?
Has the years gone by dried up the love we once felt
Has the blistening sun dried up the river I made with my tears
Or have we both been lost through the tunnel of hopelessness
I can't figure this out
Love like triganometry you must break it down to get the correct answer
Math wasn't my best subject
But I do know this
1-1=0
Zero
My hero
You once came to save me when I was down
Down
I have return
I yearn
For a man to hold me in countless possibilities
Fullfill my capabilities
Enrich my youthful delight
Erruption in lust
All these things above
Now it seems that our love took a shove to
Convenience
Convenience
Is all we now can give
This is no way to live
I need you to tell me there is no way that we are going to live
like this
I miss
You
Don't you?
We sleep apart
I question who has you at heart
Is it those women who call you through the night?
Is it those women who throw you a bone
Leaving me alone
To fend for myself
Wealth
Couldn't patch this thing together
Ask Usher
Papers
He was ready to sign
Sign
Seal
Delivered
My lips quiver
Knees buried into my chest
Head rest
As I ponder this ?uestion
"What are we here for?"​

Lavette112/Nevar112
copyright 2009

 

[$$RICH$$]

a question asked by millions yet da answer lay within only there rest your answer

this was very touching made me think and ask what are we here for !
this piece was well written sis

 

[Antwan]

This piece paints a great mental picture. Though the sentimental question of often asked, it is not often answered quite so well. Thank you.

 

[nevar]

yep thanks for the love given to me on this piece!

 

[abstract219]

Now thats expressive. Real expressive. Write on, Poet