Black Poetry : WHAT! are we going to teach our children!

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what....

    what...


    i say what...

    i say what...


    are we going to teach our children!...



    raise them with fear of our neighbour...


    Or raise them with strenght and love..


    What ..


    i say what..


    What are we going to teach our children..


    raise them with Lies..

    or raise them with truth...


    What...

    what ...


    what....





    raise them with fear of human beings ..

    or


    raise them with fear and love for a mighty GOD ......WHAT!....


    i said...

    what....



    ask youre self what.....




    what are we going to teach our childeren...

    To play what!

    To draw what !

    To dream what!


    To get a Job....What!


    To love WHAt!.....




    all coloured children..


    Red,Yellow,Brown,Pink,DeepBrown,Yellowpink,Redbrown,YellowBrown,YellowPink..


    coloured children...

    what are we going to teach our children...



    How to love themselves...
    each and every part ,cel ,Of themselves...
    formed and made by the hands of god.....
    Their hands
    ,their legs
    ,their toos ,
    their feet,
    their arms,
    their chest,
    their butts ,
    their genitals,
    their heads ,
    their hair,
    their schoulders,
    their ears
    their nose
    ,
    their mouth,
    their eyes,
    their voice ,


    What do we want teach out chidren !!!
    i said what...
    do we teach them how to Hate..
    to despise themselves...
    tell them their are not wanted...
    tell them their were an accident..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    In these days People think they Create life..

    ""we didnt plan it ...,he or she was,nt planned,,"' "'it was an accident ""
    (oh lord,,i cry i cry i weep for thee young souls,of the poision comming out of Grownfooks mouth.
    let me stand up for them ,and pray and hope you can break the curses they call over them in jezus name.)

    What !!! HUH ...i said what !! are we going to teach our children


    tell them that they stand no change to dream
    to become what they dream of..
    to make changes because of fear of ........
    of of

    OF WHAT!...

    current rullers...?

    Every country needs a ruller....
    a leader,and the question is how do you know if this ruller is good or rulling good?
    no one is perfect...
    but you can see it by its fruits,and it has to be a God fearing man...

    CAUSE GOD IS THE RULLER OF ALL...


    What is Ment to Be is MENT to BE ,,,as the bibel speaks....

    but do i have to fill in their dreams...????
    to be or not to be...
    the little ones Dreams..???


    No...!

    I encouriage them..
    and if it is nessasary..

    I STAND UP FOR THEM.....!


















    (ps ,this is not finnished but i .....have to take a pause,and breath some.)












    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do continue on please cant wait till you return my sister. flo on.:love:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what are we going to teach our children
    what !
    the truth
    the power of almighty
    the life of education
    thy history
    loyality & faithful
    to honor & respect
    what !
    hope beyond fear
    how to live in care
    impower our future
    our children
     
  4. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent question. Could be the difference between 60 more years of stagnation or progress.
    flo on, poet
     
  5. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) djeez hahaha cool down sister sister :wink:
    that last sentence about you needing to take a breath nearly killed me
    you're always so real about you're feelings
    no hiding, no pretending..that's you


    but
    i agree with you
    on the part about what we want to teach our childeren
    because every child holds a piece of the future


    luv
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this poem was great....
    i felt the emotion ooze'n from every line....
    as nevar said....please finish this joint
    because what u are sayin needs to be heard.....bigtime!

    one love
    khasm
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO DAT WAZ NICELY WRITTEN
    I LUV DAT POEM, I WISH SUMBODY WUDDA TOLD ME DAT WEN I WAS YOUNGER, HOW 2 LUV MYSELF
    AND I ALSO WISH SUMBODY WUDDA STOOD UP 4 ME
    I WAS FEELIN YO ERRWORD, AND IT WAS SO REAL
    SO FLO ON WIT TRUTHS




    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  8. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Holding my breath while you catch your breath waiting for the completion of this piece. It was a powerful question that we must ask ourselves if we are going to bring up the next generation right. Nice flo cuz.
     
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