Black Poetry : What am I to do once I fall in love with a FOOL

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  1. IntuitioninMD

    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    What am I to DO once I fall in love with a FOOL
    I have tried to avoid his type
    Day and Night
    But he snuck up on me
    Like a theif in the night
    He hypnotized me with his eyes
    and the perfection of his D*^&
    He seduced me by the sight
    of his beautiful sexual full lips
    When he saw me I thought he wanted a taste
    of my strength and my love
    Instead his goal was to break my spirit
    The game that fools that can't give love back- PLAY.
    What am I to do after falling in love with a FOOL
    BECAUSE THIS GAME ... I CAN'T PLAY.
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the flow

    This is such good work U keepit up my sister! :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u perfected this to da core tyte write well done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You'll find a way to get out of this game, won't be easy, but in the end you'll move on. I think most have been here a time or two.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you answered your own question
    "this game....i can't play"
    so don't play it...
    pain will pass
    it will eventually go away
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one i can understand this was str8 tight...nice work Poet

    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice rhythm in this piece...
    Love is a gamble but
    sometimes it's not love
    just it's imposters..."Lust & Passion"...
    in that vein...
    I say just have fun and enjoy it
    for what it is...

    Nice flow poet!
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a tyte write and i love the flow of it
    just learn how to play the fool instead of the fool palying you
     
  9. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can definitly feel this one... been there before but i had to set myself free. the longer you stay, the harder it is to go. i know lots of females in this position right now...
     
  10. fade

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    Tight piece,
    I know what you mean, we often get caught up in that, but we live and we learn and the pain do fade away.

    Fade
     
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