Black Poetry : what am i doing???

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Jul 24, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i went
    playing in the garden
    wanting to plant seeds
    in the midst of foliage
    and folds
    trying to find the hole
    i could not see

    i kept digging 'round
    for the soul of thee
    'til the tree began to fall
    to dry up
    to wither away
    leaving only the stump

    i went playing
    in the thickness of the garden

    WHAT WAS I DOING?
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    b.


    hmmmm...?

    what was you doin'... indeed! :)
    sometimes... curiousity... well it just... well...
    nevamind! you know what i mean! :wink:

    thank you for sharing. :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS for allowing your rays to fall on me, today.:)

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  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hmmm

    i sure as hell would like to know

    hmmmm


    DSS

    phat piece Baller

    DSS
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JUST playing in the garden, of course.:)

    THANKS So'ja.
     
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