Black Poetry : What am I doing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Jan 1, 2007.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At the moment
    In the time
    For that reason
    I can't seem to see why it is I'm doing what I'm doing
    I'm living in a world where
    My point of view is that
    Of none other I share
    the intellect
    I share the life
    I share the world
    and all I want
    Is clarity I
    let the n ew world come and my ways are old
    why is it so hard to find my way
    to streets of gold
    You feel the sensible things make no sense
    SO you think and still get no answer
    Questions of what fate holds tight grip
    on me like cancer
    I try to hide away from the things that
    Cause me the most pain
    Made me want to maintain
    But I just don't know anymore
    I can't figure it out
    Maybe its really not worth it


    Life is becoming too hard to deal with so for now I think I won't
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keep ya head up high what seem dem and unknown comes to light
    your being tested stay strong and moving forward to understand the life's
    plan late what looks un worthy is worthy
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely done poet I can feel the pain that you are conveying in this piece.
     
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    my sista i will be praying for you! for i too was going through something similar. but i soon realize that our battles are not our own. its the heavenly Father. he will fight them for you. but you must have faith in order to succeed. God bless you and your family always!
     
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    thank you I'm trying to keep it together
     
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    Sista Nevar said it beautifully sista. Be Blessed!
     
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    thank you
     
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