Quiet Poetry Lounge : What A Wonderful World

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Innocence

    Isolated

    Distance

    In the instance

    Of john doe

    I liked it

    Adolesence

    Precisely

    Spying me

    Heavenly

    Subtle

    Travels

    Across the Atlantic Sea

    Thoughts

    carefully

    collected

    instrument

    my mind

    stops

    in the coolness of you

    your pavement wide and deep

    amongst the bussle

    people hussle

    paper game

    honor the almighty dollar

    hold up ya head

    pressed collar shirts and ties

    Gee, you sure look nice

    in you I see the world

    dance with thee in two step time

    In you I see little countries

    That rest so peacefully in your arms of cushion

    With them they bring their ways, their lives, their souls, their dreams, their visions, their lies, their disguise, their demise

    The agenda

    Hidden

    Lays the math

    Thereafter

    What A wonderful world

    In a moment

    I embraced you as mine

    As billows of smoke

    intoxicated me from your underground tunnels

    Eyes everywhere

    Looking

    Looking

    Looking


    Out of your underground

    I found myself in a vast space

    Of eloquent grace

    Of undieing strength

    Of unified length

    In you

    It was me, that you find

    The birth of a journey

    Shelter me in your wings

    Beautiful Skies of youth

    Never forget

    Your truth

    Its ya ways

    That are beside me

    I smile

    I love ya style

    You understand

    You are wonderful to me

    As I walk

    and

    walk

    elevated

    wasn't caught

    just raptured

    in the still of the hour

    to feel your power

    Ill never cowar

    Just a reality

    Sighing happily

    ....


    You bring healin

    I breathe you
    And feel you
    And you freeing
    Freeing me
    Your history

    Is what the dealy
    You know what I'm saying?

    Resting in you

    You know me

    You're a different world

    Just like the show
    With Dwane with those flip up his glasses
    Well thought out

    And meeting together

    Like in School Days

    To turn another chapter of our lives

    Your charm is working

    And there's no harm

    In what you relaying to me

    Everywhere I look

    You deal freely

    Just make it plain to see

    And anyways

    I wasn't looking for you to be

    Just to feel free

    Pressure?

    Just proof

    That in the beginning

    There was

    A Word

    And the Word

    Was with God

    And the Word

    Was God

    And was with God

    And in the beginning he just spoke the word

    And it became

    Like a poem

    Nobody could really deeply know him

    Just it was bigger than what you could percieve or think or dream

    cuz His way are higher than our ways

    And His thoughts higher than our thoughts

    And it makes sense

    That I rest safely

    near tranquility

    In

    51 W 75th St

    New York, New York



    Brought to you by

    The Letter "D"

    D is for

    Desert

    A place where the rubber meets the rode and its always hot and never cold.

    And the Letter "S"

    that stands for storm.

    A time when when all is uncertain until

    God speaks and there is calm and silence
    I was your guest
    and you blessed me until
    I released it
    What was numbing it

    Oh the glory of your name
    In heaven and earth will I proclaim
    Need not have any shame
    I
    I
    I
    I
    I
    just could not believe

    I
    I
    I
    I
    I
    I

    understood every reason why

    Oh
    And
    I

    Needed to feel sweet salvation
    smoothly sailing from station to station
    I have much appreciation

    You are amazin
    Heaven on earth
    To
    Me
    Is
    In
    New
    York
    City

    And how much more can I describe such a sensation
    Memory seals all dications
    And In my mind
    I remember a time
    That I knew
    That it was all mine
    All mine
    All
    Mine
    You are Mine

    From Queens and Brooklyn
    You look like my little ole Oakland
    Manhattan you remind me until we reach Times Square and yes now I see
    Harlem, yes, I remember you in past life not sure if I'm completely welcomed
    However thank you for allowing me to grace the paths of you that were once walked by legends
    And how great thou art
    To make me feel a mutual connection
    It goes without saying
    Its universal,
    You know what I'm sayin, the Bronx
    One day but in so little time I could not see it all
    However one day you will be present as I will be
    Infinately, one day we can have relations
    Or in spirit
    We can capture a moment
    If only to have your heart
    Every corner of you
    I could find an inner refuge
    You're so simple
    Nothing faking
    Melodies
    Of sheer elation
    The best is in the spirit of only so many a few, if only you knew
    What I see
    Is beauty and you are beautiful
    To me

    Can you see what I see?

    Can you hear what I hear?

    Can you feel what I feel?

    Can you?

    Curiosity and ambition are what you see in my eyes
    A glow
    A spark

    Just to be free
    Just to be free
    Aww, Just to be free
    Simply free

    My soul rejoices
    In your everlasting covenant

    Loving
    I'm sitting here loving you

    Just the way you are

    Falling fromt he stars to nestle in ya arms
    Every sky is you
    Every face is you
    Every sound is you
    Just to know who you are
    And in the end
    In the end
    In
    The
    End
    Was the beginning
    And you were
    With
    Me
    From the beginning
    Yes,
    You
    Were
    With
    Me
    From
    The
    Beginning


    So overcome with emotion
    I confess my sincerest devotion
    I express my souls depths flowing in and out of an ocean
    Respect I owe
    My purpsose driven life is revelation
    Prepared to give an account
    I'll be at the witness stand
    To say that it's you that I can't live without
    This union so perfect
    It fits me trully
    I'll will surely see you soonly.
    No need to doubt
    You are my one and only
    Forever
    I know you'll never leave me lonely.
    I stay here and you keep me and hold me.
    Only you can know me

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa! now this was awesomely tyte DS.....
     
  3. Desert Storm

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    Thanks Rich

    I had the opportunity to go on a missions trip to Spain for two weeks about three weeks ago and when I found out we were flying out of JFK on a Monday and would have open a Saturday and Sunday to be in New York before the trip, I made arrangements to be there early and another day after we came back from Spain.

    Coincidentally, my friend from New Jersey called me a week or two before I was to arrive in New York and him and his friends picked me up from the airport and we hung out on Saturday. That Sunday his friend and sister from NY took me to church with them and made sure I got around ok.

    So as you know,I've only talked about going to NY so many times and I was very happy to have gotten that chance. I know I will soon return at one point. I had major jet lag when I flew in but next time I will be on a mission, For sure!

    Ha ha ha.

    Thanks Rich,
    You're always so encouraging.

    P.S. when i came back from NY, I had a lay over in Chi City. One day I will visit too. I have an aunt who lives there. We have a few teachers in our family and she is really into the edumacation scene over there and she's really funny too. Good people. All I have to say about Chi City is that flirtin wit da menz can make me really Chi. Ha ha ha. Me and this dude locked eye ballz for about a min or two and then I had to snap myself out of it. Those hip-hoppin dayz are ova! ha ha ha. Next time around wedding bells will be ringing.

    Ding!, Dong!, Ding!, Dong! LOL ha ha ha



    DS
     
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    wow that's great , lovin it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To think that your travels would bring forth such a wonderfully free flowing scribe. Always a pleasure reading you.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for stopping by watzinaname. Glad you enjoyed it. I know it was a lil bit lengthy but thanks again. It was my first time outside the country and other than Atlanta out of Cali so it was coo. Still wondering what my next step is goin to be. So that's where I'm at, for now.

    Gods blessings

    Desert Storm
     
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    Hi Desert Storm
    My goodness, your flow is so comforting
    I can feel the joy of loving life for no other reason but because
    It is a blessing. Just reading your drop made me
    You made me take a deep breathe and just enjoy all of these moments
    I'm touched very deeply. Feeling the joy! and looking forward to more

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    This was a Powerful path.......
    I liked to be taken.....
    Ups DS
    Keep the Flow!!!!
     
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    This was a really Flowing Path Sis I have to say.......You took it so many places....just as if you we traveling NY with your words Very cool....Expressive Flow ON DESERT STORM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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