Black Poetry : what a man needs

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Dec 15, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    here is a song/poem i wrote this week



    What a man needs

    Lord, what a man needs

    I’m telling ya

    I don’t even know what men need
    All I know is I need someone to heal me when I bleed
    When I cry, wipe my tears
    When I get scared, take away my tears

    Something strong, to keep me holding on
    Somebody to kick it with, get your roll on

    When I’m feeling low, I’m wrong
    Just someone to play the right the song
    Ohhh, oh oh, oh , oh yeah

    I don’t even know what men want
    Something more intense than a woman to flaunt
    Power and desire to make him go higher
    When his world gets too heavy, someone to make it lighter

    Somebody smiling keep his face from cracking
    Somebody that’s gone be real, never acting

    When I’m feeling low, I’m wrong
    Just someone to play the right the song
    Ohhh, oh oh, oh , oh yeah

    Just somebody that he can appreciate
    Take his negatives and alleviate
    All his pain and frustration
    To give him more a voice in a crooked nation
    A supporter a father figure
    Somebody to tell him he’s not a ******

    When a man stands divided he will fail
    Reasons why so many black men in jail
    Why? Why? Oh, why?

    When I’m feeling low, I’m wrong
    Just someone to play the right the song
    Ohhh, oh oh, oh , oh yeah


    Why? Why? Oh, why ?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte i like it
    love to hear da music behind it
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold on babee here i come... i got the bandage for yo scares and tissue for yo tears!!!
    On da real i am feelin this!!!
    GOD BLESS :coffee:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so tight..
    feelin dis.....:angel1:
     
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