Black Poetry : **What A Day/Today I Feel**

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What A Day

    Cold weather greets me.
    Kisses of ice on my cheek.
    What a day.
    No worries or problems;
    i'm at ease within myself.
    Chillin right alongside the cold,
    breathing everything into this heart of gold.
    Beneath the surface of this reality
    I exist in a pleasurable fallacy of this
    world revolving solely around me.
    Angles watching over me.
    God kisses me gently and slowly I melt.
    What a day,
    What a day,
    What a day.

    Copyright© 2004



    **((Today I Feel))**

    What I feel today is
    indescribable and empty.
    Today i'm existing in earth tones and
    casual shades of grey, slate, and cement.
    I'm feeling wonderfully earthy and lovely.
    A mellow song sung with scatts and
    carried by a jazzy riff.
    I'm loving this work of art known as Me.
    Chilling, low-pressure, under wraps
    and all that; thats what i'm feeling right now.
    This world moves at a rapid pace...so aimless
    and out of whack,
    yet ya boi maintains a peace...
    that peace that clings to me like skin.
    I'm diggin the bag i'm in and
    every filling, fiber and essential part that
    I am and could have ever been.
    What I feel today is
    nothing short of perfect peace.
    I'm diggin this life and lifestyle in
    a high and natural key.
    I'm high off of creativity, love and intellect;
    What I feel today is
    what I reflect.

    Copyright © 2004
    PropheticNsyght
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Both pieces conveyed a kind of ease and contentment that puts a mind at peace. Flow on poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i like the flava of this here tyte flow poet
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's always fortunate to be able to reflect on the easiness the world can bring at times, despite the many obstacles that object to that...
     
  5. angelicsage

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    I've always enjoyed how emotion filled
    your work is, as well as how introspective
    the journey is...

    Always seeking that deeper...yet higher
    level of exisitence with Spirit, mind and body...

    Love the transition of color to emphasize the mood...


    Very nice,
    Sage
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh...the peace of the day....the early morn's kiss lets me know that today is unlike no other...

    you have penned well...twice over....

    one.
     
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    Dont loose your passion with your art poet, I am enjoying your flows and the emotion u are filling them with. :dj:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love each and everyone of you who have taken the time to give me mad love for what I've been doing. I appreciate you all with every inch of me! Blessings and peace family. God bless and I love you all deeply.
     
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