Black Poetry : What’s wrong with me

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  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What’s wrong with me

    Look at her
    Look at me
    There not a lot of difference I see
    You ask me her name
    Making me feel shame
    Because you didn’t ask mind
    That wasn’t the first time
    That happen to me
    Is it my personality?
    What is it that she has that I don’t?
    That makes you want
    To step up
    Am I not good enough?
    Do I look like dirt?
    Do I stank
    Why can’t you say two words to me that ain’t
    What’s your friend name?
    What’s my name?
    Why don’t you want?
    Mo info
    On me
    But no you looking at bookey
    Don’t get me wrong it’s not that I’m not happy for my friend
    But what don’t you understand
    Everyone’s asking me her name like it’s some kind of game
    What’s wrong with me?
    Ain’t I pretty?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da answer is yesssssssss!!!!
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaay UniqueOne :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thanks for joining us and sharing this flow. It's very nice.

    I've noticed that you have quite a few (10+) peaces on the first page of the poetry forum. Please read our Poetic Etiquette thread, as it asks the Members not to post too many of their peaces at one time ... if one of us posts a lot of peaces at the same time ... it keeps the other poetry and poets from being featured fairly ... please space your submissions out over time, while giving love to the work others have shared. Thanks.

    Again, thanks for joining us and feeling comfortable enough to share your work.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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