Black Poetry : We've Never Even Met (an anonymous letter to him)

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful You,

    I wonder what you would say if I told you the truth—
    that I am completely falling... in love with you... & that
    no matter how crazy it seems... or what I say or do... my
    heart possesses a fundamental desire to beat only for you...
    & we've never even met... face to face… at least not yet

    I wonder what you would say if I told you that—
    every single day I come to the poetry page in search of you
    & to receive another taste... of that special thing you do
    hoping & wishing... this will be the day… that something I say
    will make you want to know me... personally

    I wonder what you would do if only you knew—
    that you hold the leading role in all of my
    daytyme... nyghttyme... for all tyme dreams & you've never
    even touched me... at least not physically/ but your words...
    those phenomenal words... move & caress me in a far greater
    capacity than the hands of another man… ever could

    I wonder what you would see if you were sitting beside me—
    as I am reading you... I hope you would see me entirely...
    with no pretense or pride... my heart & soul open wide... &
    me overjoyed at the awesome opportunity to experience you
    & internalize your views on love & life... ‘cause I know your
    scribes are a perfect reflection & representation of the real you

    I wonder... if you knew all these things… what you would do—
    could we live out these dreams/would you even believe me
    the answers remain to be seen… & one day I will be courageous
    enough to tell you what you truly mean to me.

    UntilThen…
    :heart:Sunshyne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I WANNA KNOW!???

    WHO IS HE THAT TURN THE LOVE OF SHE????
    WHO IS HE THAT CAPTURED THEE?????
    WHOM IS HE THAT TAKETH ONES HEART????
    I WANNA KNOW WHO IS THIS KING.?
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICHNE$$...

    (LOL)... you're so nosey!! :lol:

    now would it be fair for me to
    tell you before i tell him?!?

    thanks for the read my love...

    ShyninInYourRichness...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    *scratchin' my head*

    cyberlovin' like nita huh...
    i ain't mad..
    tyte scribe ndeed...

    oh yeah, who iz he??

    j'hiah
    curious
    in his serene garden..
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'HIAH...

    :p... you're just a nosey as $$RICH$$!(lol)

    & it's not quite the same
    as cyber-love... it's what
    i would call Poetic Love...
    he moves me... what can i say?

    thanks for the read...

    InfiniteLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma sistah...

    sistah gyrl,
    been where ya at and the feelin' intensifies daily doesn't it??? So, who's the lucky...or should I say soon to be blessed poet???

    I wanna know...I wanna know...I wanna know!!!!

    Lotsa love and luck with your anonymous poet. I'm rootin 4ya!

    Afri
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, otay

    like roses are red
    violets are blue love......lol

    oh, otay...
    make sure he aight with me though...
    your bruh.

    nfinite
    in his serene garden...
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see beautiful written all over this
    piece. Well done, and so nicely put GA_S
    I know the feeling GA_S, I'm feeling the love
    of a special poet myself. :wink:
    I can't wait for his words to make love to
    me, to my mind, and to my soul...wheeeeew
    on that note let me end....
    and ..QQ ummmmm Jehiah shaaaaaaaaaaad uuuuuuup!!!!!!
    LOL...LOL
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Curiosity is.... ummm... healthy. I guess... (LOL)

    AFRI...
    the feelin' does seem to intensify...
    minute by minute!! thanks for the read
    & the love... i wish i could say who
    he is... but i can't. (not ryght now at least);)

    JH...
    nooo... not like "roses are red..." (lol)
    our thang is a bit more advanced than that!
    come to think of it... he's brilliant actually!
    i love it when you're overprotective! :)

    NITA...
    ooookay! you feelin' me, ryght?!? thanks
    for the love & support sis... you are
    truly da best!! :)

    LOVE... LOVE... & MO' LOVE...
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne Im flattered and I think it's really cool dat you wrote this for me...lmao I know im trippin huh? lol

    But seriously this has to be the sweetest expression of a semi-spoken crush eva created! and I totally understand where you comin from on this one... it's like (there's some **** I want you to know, but I cant/wont tell you) so we gonna have to just BE type of thing unless fate changes da script. well dat's just my personal extraction from this joynt. been there baby girl. cant help you though...lol but at least now he knows... or does he? lol

    Tight to def ma! cant pick a fav part, I'd have to retype the whole **** poem!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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