Black Poetry : Wet

[renee31127]

You dipped into my ocean of love
Drank from it's flowing streems
All I can do is feel you
Touch you
As you and I become us
We are one
These waves of lust crash one after another
My tide seem to never subside
Water crashing, splashing
Dripping wet, soaked from head to toe
Slippin, sliding
Taking me on this ride of love with you
Trying to subdue these feelings
Having no choice but to let things flow
Beats of Rock The Boat playing in my head
As you do just that
My ship has sailed
On a voyage to ecstasy
And I never want to go back to dry land

 

[watzinaname]

Hey if this happened to me, I'd want to stay at sea too. These images were so vivid, just flowing with that water, wow, very nicely done.

 

[MzBlkAngel]

now this was sweet
posed well.....
i feel ya on dis indeed
tight drop

 

[$$RICH$$]

lovin da waves of the sea here
tyte drop

 

[angelicsage]

Sister this piece was...

shall I say....

"Fluuuuuuuuuuuuuidly.....Wonderful"
as I just caught the passionate wave and
rode it until the end...

Beautiful flow!