Black Poetry : Wet Lips

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cherryblossom, Jun 7, 2009.

  1. cherryblossom

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    Just as after a soft rain
    Washing away the pain
    Of former disappointment and hurt
    Rinsing from me all the emotional dirt
    That once muddied my heart...a renewed start
    Freshened and cleansed by your love....

    Just as after a soft rain
    Your love settles upon me
    And the evidence of your essence does yet remain
    Quenching me
    Drenching me
    With your love.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    cherryblossom

    very nice poet. light and tight....just right.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da sweet embrace of a cascading love ...this was so warm and gentle sis
     
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    just as morning's dew...

    ...allows its seepage to moisten and saturate the petals of this rose. i await the moment...when you allow nature's dew to accrue...and its seepage to moisten and saturate the lips of your love...for me.:)

    the wonders and joys of life.

    the river floweth.
     
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    Monetary and Rich: Your praise is as refreshing as a soft rain.



    Baller! Whoodie-HOO! Well, actually, that's a Tulip, not a Rose.

    But, sweet talk like THAT will letcha "Tiptoe thru the Tulips!" :wink: LOL!
     
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