Black Poetry : Were II deep II real

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  1. TRUTH_SPEAKA314

    TRUTH_SPEAKA314 New Member MEMBER

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    have you ever felt as if the world wasnt really made for you
    you sort of think out side the box, around the box , over and under the box but never seemed to think as one who is in the box well this is dediated to that thought

    Colab with deep_lyrikz my brother

    Truth_ Speaker colab with Deep_Lyrikz

    (Out of place out of mind_out of space out of time)
    I try to rattle the dome of a young minded g
    I try to paint pictures that blind men see
    but you wont belive
    how devious the world can be
    im a grown man enbodied in a shell thats 16
    trying to get big green ( but not money hungry)
    without getting chiefed
    I got wicked words that can bring a coward to knees
    I shower the trees and orchids of lost souls with fat smiles and loud cries
    cheering for their success of leaving this dredful life
    You can do anything if you try
    But why must i do more work
    or feel more hurt than the next man
    just cause of a skin tan
    you dont know how it is man
    living tryin not to have kids man
    this how it is man
    this is we live man
    tryin to keep from saten
    but it seems likes he watin
    for to trip or up and slip
    but i did it and never will i do it again

    Deep Lyrikz

    Id rather be dead than live hell
    i herd the my boy got shot and is not doing well
    but im not to dwell
    on my past life
    but i live in a fast life
    surrouded by the boys with badges and flashlights
    During my Ist offense
    I was the fist to jump the fence
    hold rocks and dump the clips
    i felt i was the **** then i got locked up
    then i herd form my moms my boy shot up
    (that was my turnig point)
    Now my head bowed in my hands
    my man was face down in the sand
    my dogs growl from the can
    when it crunshed from the pounds from the man
    it was loud than i ran
    I felt if i live by his hand
    im a die by his hand
    i ran thinkin back to the gingerbread man
    but this was real oh how i wanna wake up
    ohh god Im sorry that i ever wanted to stack cake up
    and if you get me out i promise never agiain to do that bull ****




    My life is real its like when wife a seal or fight a bill
    it's life
    and ima stay on top of the water even with the sharks
    cause im no longer scared



    copyright 2003 *
     
  2. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this one...i feeling this to the fullest
    GOD BLESS :toast:
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was supa tyte...
    real lyrics for real times...message heard
    one love
    khasm
     
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    i likes this one...very tight...:angel1:
     
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    right right sibling collabos comin through like what!!
    nothin like personal testimony to tell the truth
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop speak on
     
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