Black Poetry : Werdz

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by KaNvaZ, Oct 15, 2005.

  1. KaNvaZ

    KaNvaZ Member MEMBER

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    Words are underestimated
    Taken for granted by those educated
    Simply communicated
    Debated and stated

    Words are used, abused
    For all the wrong reasons
    Misguided by social rules
    Crucified like Jesus

    Individuals lose sight
    Of the power of speech
    People ignoring the reach
    Of what poetz try to reach

    Words get slung
    Like bullets in a conflict
    Directed to be corrupted
    By those who can't comprehend it

    Sit in the halls of Congress
    And with the right phrase
    A war can be launched
    Designed to decimate a race

    But I dare to retaliate
    And oppose the tides that hate
    Dare to question
    The agendas that eradicate

    Words to me, my friend
    Are more than just syllables
    Words can be more potent
    Than anything imaginable

    With this pen I paint a picture
    Images and scenes
    Like paint on a canvas
    So rich it's almost obscene

    Whether I paint from a can
    Or scribble out a rhyme
    Words are more than 26 letters
    That noone can define

    -- KaNvaZ
     
  2. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanks Brother KaNvaZ..I like ur flow!
     
  3. KaNvaZ

    KaNvaZ Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, my brother, thank you....I really, really appreciate it. I have never really shared any of my rhymes til now, worried about getting hated on ya know?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop welcome to destee.com
    we basicly use this form for files so the family can hear you
    I'm gonna move this to the poetry get your flow on so everyone
    can enjoy reading you and drop some love .......
     
  5. KaNvaZ

    KaNvaZ Member MEMBER

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    aight thanks, bro
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words posed as well as these can never honestly be hated on. I loved the depth of this piece brotha.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kanvaz.. ive been watin to see what you do when you do it.. i see you do it well.! so do the darn thing! :heart:
     
  8. KaNvaZ

    KaNvaZ Member MEMBER

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    Yo, holla at cha!!!! Thank you, much love, much appreciated!
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    well done poet..............nice scribe

    Poetry Is!!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice flow flow on.