Black Poetry : WERDS

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IT ALL STARTED WITH A QUICK CONVERSATION
    HI, HOW ARE YOU NICE TO MEET YOU.
    WHO KNEW THAT ONE LINE WOULD LEAD TO MANY MORE
    WERDS
    OF EXPLORATION.
    TO FIND OUT WHAT MAKES YOU TICK TO SEE
    WHAT I'M ALL ABOUT
    WERDS
    OF COFIDENTIALITY
    TELLIN YOU MY DEEPEST THOUGHTS
    TELLIN ME YOUR WILDEST DREAMS
    WERDS
    OF DECLERATION
    I'M REALLY FEELIN YOU AND THIS
    YOU'RE HOPING THIS COULD BE MORE.
    WERDS FUEL AND DRIVE THIS WHOLE
    SITUATION.
    NEVA A MOMENT OF SILENCE BECAUSE THERE SEEM TO BE
    AN ABUNDNCE OF WERDS​
     
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    Sister thatgirl74
    I love this flow

    The Truth
    Keep Sharing.

    You left out the I in Werds
    It is Weird

    WERDS can tell a Story
    WERDS can be ...Incredible, Unbelievable, Out of this World and Amazing

    How they have an Effect
    On the actions of any one you meet

    I say I am feeling you
    On the Werds

    They can be Werds
    Something of bliss
    When they are strung together
     
  3. thatgirl74

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    Hodee!
    Your are right. Words can be Weird.
    Thanks for the feedback!
     
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    Hey thatgirl,
    I'm really feeling your werds of convo, and know that it's always a pleasure to read you ....werd up!!
     
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    ahhh...

    ...the joys and excitement of chance encounters...initiating conversations...hoping for that special relation. WERDS, eh? i guess that's the word for it.:)

    the river flows
     
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    nice poem. i can relate. funny how werds make u feel :)
     
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    Yes. It is part of the very fabric of our being Sister. Wonderful write.
     
  8. thatgirl74

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    PLATINUMILLITY1
    Thank you as always for the feedback .

    sarcasm4eva
    Isn't that what makes our poetry so special? Words used as tools of expression. THanks for the feedback.

    baller
    Hey I wonder where we would be if there were never any conversation. Thanks for hearing me.

    queentswana
    Hey sis thanks for always Listening. Yeah Werd UP! LOL
     
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    awesome flow felt all of it too sis , it's amazing how that works
     
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    Yeah, them "words" will gitcha in some situations, won't they?! LOL!

    This was so relatable!
     
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