Black Poetry : Wellspring

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enter the dark
    And listen to my heart
    It coun-souls me I listen
    It washes me I glisten
    Reaching into the wells depths
    The echoes of the mind is what’s left
    In an attempt to lift the sacred fluid
    I go within like an ancient druid
    Trapped by beast below
    Says, “You must answer a question to be let go"
    “ Where is home? “, he begins to asks of me
    ‘Not here’ is my thought, but I answer politely
    “Home is where the heart is” I respond
    “Go” he says ”and greet the coming dawn
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow blkthunder.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    meet & greet the coming dawn

    well posed poet!
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see this is why i'm one of your biggest fans. nice piece.

    Kim
     
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    Bless you souls for your continued responses..
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he stood
    ...out of the darkness, he came
    knowing.

    THANK YOU.
     
  7. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice poet
    bless you