Quiet Poetry Lounge : ... well

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, Mar 27, 2001.

  1. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    love doing for you
    like i do for me
    but when i did ...

    ... well

    yours was mine
    mine was yours
    till you ...

    ... well

    gave to you
    confident
    you'd give to me ...

    ... well

    cried many tears
    you said i was
    too emotional ...

    ... well

    got someone else
    to make me smile
    huh? what you say? ...

    ... well
     
    Destee, Mar 27, 2001
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  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well Alrighty then, gone gurl...
     
    Nita, Mar 27, 2001
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  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well i guess he should have been paying attention!



    One
     
    UbZoRbShUn, Apr 2, 2001
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well !!
    sho nuff know now
    o'well
     
    $$RICH$$, Jun 18, 2003
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    Hi Destee, :wave:

    I love this piece!! :toast:

    It certainly shows him to pay attention to a wonderful lady!!

    Thanks for sharing this one!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
    Sierra, Jun 19, 2003
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  6. alter

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    well..

    that's life, huh...now that's reality. i like the use of words here, just enough, nothing extra. just like it should be.
     
    alter, Jun 19, 2003
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    this was a nice blast from the past... interesting how we can love somebody better than their own kin...and then.... wellllll!

    loved reading it again, Ms. Destee!

    alyce
     
    alyce, Jun 23, 2003
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    Some unfortunate soul has gone to the "well" one too many times.
     
    1poetsought, Jul 8, 2003
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    I thought I knew him...

    well...


    I really liked this piece!
     
    Alizentang, Jul 17, 2003
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  10. PlayWitItPimp05

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    WELL is right sistah!!
    Let em know' girl!!! :wink:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
    PlayWitItPimp05, Jul 18, 2003
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