Black Poetry : WELL THEN FRIEND

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This not the way it should be
    leaving me void empty and free
    turning your back now on me
    what is this , i now feel and see

    That your love was never wit me
    and ya soul was on a one way street
    taking advantage, my heart now bleed
    from the crap ya mouth had to feed

    You never really did one deed
    and how can you betray ya creed
    and the love of ya dreams
    i guess lucky lady ya history

    See i no longer hold this need
    just this deep void in me
    and cold as ice like tasty freeze
    ya now my none existance memory

    Cause loyality your never be
    honor you never can see
    so thank you lady yep! i'm free
    from da spell of ya nasty misery

    so let me take this walk :bye:
    i'm sick :sick: from being caught
    before i :zipit: zip it up and stuff
    what you taught no other sought
    so lucky lips ya bleep been bought
    for a half of an cost see sweetie
    ya really lost ........I win again !!!!
    cause i'm free from ya world of sin
    well then friend this da end ...... :wave:


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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know I hurt you deeply dear Rich,
    but...
    my mind momentairly hit a ditch

    I know it seems like I just didn't care
    but..
    for what I was searching...I had right here

    I can't say I blame you for feeling the sting
    when I bounced off, to have that fling
    but...

    It wasn't no fun, I only felt :rain:
    cause I know I left you in so much pain
    but...
    I lost my head, and started to roam
    do you :bowdown: forgive me? can I come home?

    *note to self*

    I just got to leave that gin :wine: alone...
    it [email protected] near made me lose my home​
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    betrayal hurts in a way that do leaves a void
    this was a perfect flow of how one would feel
    in this situation....digging the flow...
    but lets see....a door closes another one always opens
    yanno what i mean....


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Betrayal is a painful thing, especially when you didn't even see it coming. Friendship is a two way street, there has to be both give and take, not just take. Feeling this flow brotha.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Angel i feel ya on that every time the door close the next one open
    and changes are made in the structure of beings ......Thankz a million

    watz so true when it hit blindly ya heart stops for that moment of tyme
    what was a two way become one way all you can do is cry, or lie to yourself
    Thankz sis for that ...

    Queent..........well now !!
    I know sometime the heart wanna play
    but
    why leave me this way
    and
    what was it i did not say
    to
    keep my love into ya every day
    yes
    it leave me in deep tears
    and
    at lost of soulful cares
    yet
    i bear the pain and the fears
    see
    all the things dis can bring
    from
    da gin and fling to a king
    whewwww
    what a hot deep sting
    so
    even ya lost it ,to roam
    remember
    this deep inside of heart
    will always be ya home
    ya
    never alone get in here
    where u really belong

    wow thankz sista QT i love the hit back and it takes me to that piece you did wow!
     
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    all we have to rememeber is our path is already made for us....
    no matter the storm it is sunny on the other side....

    Peace
     
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    word Angel let me get cross this storm to the sunny side ....Thankz
     
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