Black Poetry : well-known enemy

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My friend, my pal, my "quicker picker upper"
    this is who you once were
    untill the real you had finally uncovered

    when you came out from under
    and showed me your true colors
    what was yet to be seen
    had changed my life forever

    you decieved me in ways unimaginable
    and lied,cheated and stole
    yet what you took is something unreplaceable
    you can not give it back
    no matter how hard you try
    and as much as i try to forget you
    i still can't deny

    the things that you did
    that you know were morally wrong
    you took advantage of a wrongful situation
    and kept tryin to lead me on

    although i was under the "influence"
    and could hardly walk
    that made no difference to you
    as long as i did'nt talk
    you had your way with me
    despite all of my request
    that night my words seemed to be meaningless
    as you slid your hand up my dress
    i then resorted to violence
    and i'd rather not say the rest

    i would of never thought this would be "me"
    and i could'nt believe this was "you"
    the one whom I had trusted
    and to only think i knew
    that things like this happen
    but not to people like me
    because i associated myself with people of dignity

    "that" you had none
    to do what you did
    i will never forgive you
    for the pain i have within
    but i have always been a strong soul
    so i have learned a lesson
    and that is never to trust
    even your so-called
    well known best friend

    cause that you were not
    when i was in my time of need
    i lyed there helpless
    with you on top of me
    it was YOU
    you were the one hurting me
    but now i just look at you
    as my well-known enemy
     
  2. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!

    That was deep!
    One_Love
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LADYBUG ITS A LOVE OF REALITY AND MYTH
    HE WAS A MYTH OF LOVE THAT NEVER WAS
    DES BE TYGHT AND WORDS OF STRONG VIBE

    COME IN FLIGHT AS I MEND YA HEART SHO
    U LOVE HOLD U CLOSE LIKE A LOVEBUG
    I AM DESTINY OF DESIRES TO CARESS YA SOUL
    RELAX YO MIND IN MINES AS TYMES GO BY
    LOOK UP THERE I FLY
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****! ladybug. this was deep.

    well done.

    one love, blak
     
  5. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...
    sending ya a hug..
    *******************HUG*******************

    8th!
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang sis,..........
    (((((HUGS)))))
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speechless

    thank you for sharing.

    A
     
  8. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all your words of encouragement

    Thanks! it is quite hard to deal with certain issues or obstacles in life but i use my mind,soul,heart and last but not least WORDS to deal with these things, however i am glad to say that "it" did not go as far as he intended....thank god, i am just glad that i was physically able
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lady bug... dat's my daughters nickname...lol gotta give you love ma. Excellent flow!!!!!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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