Quiet Poetry Lounge : WEDNESDAY FLOW...Shaneak!!!

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this afternoon
    peeped the pages of destee
    rhyme skills are rusty
    but saw shaneak
    and couldn't resist
    #1, numero uno
    top notch mami
    on my flow list
    so i blew a gentle kiss
    closed my eyes
    made a wish
    that she would
    scribble scrabble wit me
    and prepare a poetic dish
    one that i could savor
    tasting each distinct flavor
    inhaling every morsel
    saving none for later
    so my queen where you at
    i lay my coat down over a puddle
    as you pass
    bow before you
    take off my hat
    step on the scence so regal
    my verse is done
    hit us with the sequel...
     
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    Say what...

    Say When...Say how...
    Wow...you mean i missed all of dhat....
    Skip dhat come back....
    Thursday is here....
    And i'm chillin in the rear.....
    Dreamin of dandelion fields....
    Waiting for DP2g to fly by....
    in his hot ride...
    Scoop a sista up...
    What's up...
    Cali here i come....
    Papi said i'm Number one....
    On his list...
    don't plan to dis the flow....
    Dismiss the Flow....
    But here i go
    uno dos tres quatro....

    thank you kind gentle man for lending me yo hand....
    for stepping up and being a man...
    Saw the knew shoes on my feet....
    layed down the coat so discreet....
    Tried to act like you didn't seee...
    but i knew that you were watching me....
    i glanced at you as i passed by....
    I saw you looking out the corner of your Eye...
    so i speak up...
    Just say Hi!!!!
    Amazed you gaze deep within....
    And from that point on...
    I knew i had found a new friend...
    Slipped you the digits....
    then i had to split...
    Yea...I was running late.....
    And well....the train...just wasn't going to wait....:lol:
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sistah did u hop on MARTA
    N7 to buckhead
    or E6 to Decatur
    i'm now here to flow wit cha
    better late than never
    better now than later
    wondered where u've been
    how and if
    we'd rhyme again
    but its time again
    VROOM VROOM
    hop in the ride
    shot gun in the CLK
    dinner at Justins
    then to SAMBUCA jazz cafe
    to ease our mind
    absorb melodic tunes
    leave early
    let the top down
    and bask in the glory
    of the stars and moon
    drop you off
    walk you to your door
    drive back to cali from atlanta
    while u rest easy and
    begin to snore
    i hold ur digits in my left hand
    clutch them against my chest
    can't wait to call you
    so i smash my pedal
    to the floor...
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now...

    I'm chillin at my desk think about the night before....
    Hope you made it back to cali...
    And if you can say hell Holli...berri
    if you please...
    I enjoyed the time you spent went me...
    We rolled out to buckhead....
    Where the cops team up with dha feds....
    Where people don't sleep and never go to bed...

    I had a nice time...
    just thought you should know...
    And the next time you come...
    I'll be sure to be ready to go....
    :D
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...

    made it back safely
    but not in one piece
    see there was my physical self
    with my soul and emotions in the front seat
    "man that shaneak"
    that lady's something else
    amassed poetic wealth
    spiritual health
    and gift of expression
    signed up for
    FLOW 101A
    to comprehend
    her lesson
    not a question
    of knowing what to do
    but rather
    doing what she knows
    shaking hands
    kissing babies
    educating hoes
    and schoolin' pimps
    lookah h're
    watch me stroll
    wait wait
    didja check the limp?
    AH ****
    make sure u dont forget
    D-P-2-G
    is one you'll nevah dismiss!
     
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    oooh

    And with flows like dis....
    I just can't miss...
    to rhyme you...
    to scroll wit you...
    down the page...
    and we wager on who's up next
    I can't even mess wit you cause you dha best...

    And all that stuff that you say about me...
    OOOhhh Weee....
    Thank ya DP2g....

    And i wanted to let you know...
    Just before i go...
    That your emotions are safe wit me...
    And i won't exploit them freely....
    And you can where them on you shoulder...
    Just makes you more bolder
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is that even possible...

    to get bolder
    or hotter than hot
    cold, coldest, and even colder
    maybe as time progress
    and DP2G is older
    possessing more knowledge
    infinte wisdom
    my fire will never smolder
    but instead the flames
    rise
    reach endless for the sky
    smoke gets in your eyes
    you see me and spread ur thighs
    because my confident arua
    you can't ignora
    turn off the lights
    and lock the doora
    lets not forget to light
    a candle
    steamin' hot papi
    for you ma
    think u can handle?
     
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    Think i can handle?

    Sounds like you started to ramble....
    for i am ample, able and ready...
    to get you all hot...bothered and sweaty...
    Light a candle i think we need ten...
    Sit back relaxed I'll get you glass of Hen...
    As you take me in...
    My scent so sweety and vile...
    must you reconcile to differ...

    Cause i feel the temperature rising...
    As you starting wising up...
    shoulders tighten...
    let me enlighten...you on what I could do..
    Teach you a thing or two...

    Are you ready?
     
  9. DymePlaya2g

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    um...

    teach me a thing or two
    hold u Boo
    in DP2g the D stands for DYME
    primed and perfected
    like a Napa valley wine
    like Waterford crystal i shine
    my love's sublime
    and passion unmatched
    thought u've experience
    true sensuality
    but metaphorically
    you're in an egg
    that's yet to hatch
    or crack
    i'm bringing pure exstacy
    along with the best of me
    you'll spend every waking moment
    next to me
    while the honey comb complected man
    drizzles and sizzles
    all over your chocolate tan
    tasting every finger on ur hand
    toes next is the plan
    mami grab a fan
    if it gets too hot
    or i can cool u
    with my cali breeze
    right after i tease the spot...
     
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    Bad Bad Boy!!!

    Are you trying to get me hot?...
    Waiting anticipating for me to ask you to hit the spot....
    I think not...
    I'm cooler than a winter breeze...and i'm sure you can't feel that in cali....
    But i'll take you up on that glass of wine...
    And the most luxurious restaurant we shall dine...
    and i'll get you tipsy tozy
    feeling all cozy..
    as i wrap you in my arms...
    Whispering words
    Spinning you all up in my web...
    Yes you should be alarmed...
    for i have deadly venim...
    which will have you spinning...
    when i get through wit you...
    You won't know what to do...
    and you'll forget all about my spot too...
    for at that time you'll lose your cool....
    Cause i will be all over you....

    From top to bottom...
    Spoil you wrotten...
    And have you forgotten...

    You still haven't even hit the spot!!!!
    lol;)
     
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