Black Poetry : "WED"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    For these dark arms now to embrace
    for thee dainty room wit its ordered grace
    thy love hearts now trace
    in da temple our wedding place
    for da tender charm & uplifting face

    Togetherness we join hand n' hand
    as our body, soul and mind make a stand
    into a journey by fate already plan
    is unconditional of woman & man
    bonded as one whole upon da land

    We now wed to forever and hold
    as da fire burn and never go cold
    unto a union thee treasure mold
    the beginning of lovers story yet told
    this how happiness will roll

    Each tic & toc another moment meets
    proven lust we truely defeat
    by thy father house we now greet
    to be wed until eternally
    sharing cares emotionally

    Honesty i now case upon ya feet
    respect in my heart is what i'll keep
    honor & devotion in cascading sweep
    compassionate joy we now leap
    because u make us a full complete

    So baby tell the world u waited for me
    let the lands know u and me is unique
    even when apart we never weak
    let this wed be something ummm! so sweet
    sugar and tasty thy lips a treat

    Darken soft skin so meek
    flashy dimple smile my eyez greet
    not in over our heads but yet deep
    da flava lingers as to be stuck
    but in tyme it's showin of my luck
    to have and hold myown butta cup

    I love u :ilu:
    :hearts1: :love: :hearts1: :flowers:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wed piece is this piece for anybody particular huh huh! im just messing have a good one love. flo on my love!:hearts3:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nah it's just a mental creation from what i viewed today !
    thankz for the drop in and love sis ...............................
     
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    Well, that mental vision flowed like a modern day fairy tale. This was a sweet scribe poet.
     
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    COMME BEAU! - HOW BEAUTIFUL!:hearts2:
     
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    Thankz watz when i saw these two it made my mind wonder off
    in search for how it should end ......i wonder what she said to him
    am i nosy or what !!!!!

    Creolequeen let me say thank u happy you like and enjoyed what
    i thought would come out a bomber .
     
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    awww Rich dis was so sweet and delightful
    wat a warm feelin this poem gives off
    makin me wanna be in a WED...lol

    blackluv and bp
     
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    thankz GhettoAm......I have a set of rings com'mere honey !
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...you funny Rich
     
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    ta da do be ba do ta dum dum ta dum dum
    tu ba di ba do ba dib di ba di ba do

    Some kind of Jazz

    and the mind wonders .....

    and we write

    I like seeing the changing rearraging the scribe

    Peace

    Patrice